preciousjade76 chapter 6 . 8/3/2011
Poor vegeta:(
R0xas 666 chapter 19 . 7/31/2011
Dang, I must admit that you are the best DBZ writer whose stories I have read. From the revelations of Vegeta's past, to his battle with his own memories and emotions, to the idiot's interference; you managed to ensnare my interest with a well-written, articulate beginning. I will read the sequels tomorrow, but for now I must rest...
Lyn Harkeran chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I love this! *gives you a cookie* I saw your fanart from DA and that's what brought me here. You're just as good at writing as you are at art.

I can't wait to
Mr. Deadman chapter 12 . 5/8/2011
Why is a sex scene called a lemon? And the reason Dorothy gained 2 pounds is because shes fat!
shasha chapter 19 . 4/4/2011
Fantastic story, I was riveted throughout. Your characterizations were spot on!
lu chapter 5 . 3/22/2011
Hiho :) I really like your story :D (Although I'm not that far yet). Just wanted to inform you that it has to be "Dankeschön" and "Nichts zu danken." in chapter 5 :)
cara9001 chapter 19 . 2/22/2011
nice story )
The Astral Queen chapter 19 . 2/1/2011
I couldn't stop reading this, so i copied all the chapters to a word document so I can carry it in my blackberry to read on the run. The cliff hangers, the plot twists, the details... wow. I'm in awe. I'm envious. I'm loving this so much, I'm hating you as a writer. Argh! Why can't I write like this? They kept in character the entire time, especially Vegeta. Even when kicked down, he accepted hand outs, but there was always that biting narrative of how it's like he was back under Freeza's command again, which gives us an insight of how he must have felt those 20 years. Wonderful. One of the best fics I've ever read.
The Astral Queen chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I was gonna skip to the next chapter before writing a review, but I just HAD to write one to let you know that you have a wonderful gift with words. I enjoyed this chapter; the verbal sparring, the imagery of Vegeta frantically training to achieve the next level, and how you described the armor - I swear, this feels like what definitely happened in the manga that Akira Toriyama didn't draw out. I'm envious of your effortless writing skills.
WhiteChocolate123 chapter 19 . 11/3/2010
this is one of the most beautiful vegeta and bulma storys i have ever read, you did a fantastic job! i just couldn't stop reading! thank you for this wonderful fic!
HatersGonnaHateStarscream chapter 19 . 10/19/2010
What an amazing story! I had a great time reading it. It was special than any other Bulma X Vegeta story I've read so far because of the fact that Vegeta was the one who suffered emotionally and not Bulma. In other stories it's always Bulma who gets affected emotionally. It's something different and some points of the story almost had me fall off my seat in surprise! Can't wait to read more from you! I know you wont disappoint XD Oh, and consider yourself subscribed by me
preciousjade76 chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
I have read a lot of b/v fics, but your fics never seem to disappoint me. This is my second time reading your trilogy. Please write more b/v fics. Pretty please?
Kaone the warrior chapter 16 . 9/20/2010
So Yamcha is lolnger than Vegeta and Vegeta is thicker than Yamcha...Is it suppose to be a good thing?I don't like Yamcha having anything 'more'than Vegeta it pisses me of!stupid weakling Yamcha!
JMeh chapter 19 . 9/8/2010

im sad it ended...

But in a way happy. Wut a good story _


Not the always happy goo goo crap. This was nice. Congrats on finishing :)
JMeh chapter 18 . 9/8/2010
He freakin killed her...!



Damn Yamcha...! In this chappie i actually felt bad for him...! I seriously thot for a moment, awww he cares. Not really... Well er... Kind of... Dang u and ur mixing meh emotions up...!

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