JMeh chapter 17 . 9/8/2010
Aaahhh gawd...

I figured he was raped. Wow... _ pedo-bear much...? I knew Freiza had that overly femine voice for a reason...! Dx aaahhh gawd thats gotta suck.

Nice writinf btw ahaha _

poor Piccolo...!
JMeh chapter 14 . 9/8/2010


aaahhhh... I love a good agnsty ending...
JMEh chapter 13 . 9/8/2010

he ate it...! Hahaha! Thats halarious...! xD

Poor man... He's suicidal...

Wut the crap...? Dr. Briefs...?

The Z-Fighters r probably there to persuade The Dr. That Vegetta is a good man. Er... Kind of sort of
JMeh chapter 12 . 9/8/2010

SERVES THAT WOMAN RIT! Aaahhh... Wut a beautiful cat fight
JMeh chapter 11 . 9/8/2010
I KNEW IT...! she raped Vegeta...!


poor Bulma... This has got to b the most angsty things i've ever read. But i freakn love it... _
JMeh chapter 10 . 9/8/2010

The house he just went into... That was Dortheys...? NOOOOUUUUI VEGETA RUN! SHE WILL RAPE U!
JMeh chapter 9 . 9/8/2010

Nice :D u placed the future into the story...! That was good, it wasnt cheesy or corny. _
JMeh chapter 8 . 9/7/2010
Is Piccolo gona take Vegetta to Kami...?

NOOOUUU VEGETA DONT DIE...! Dx thousands of fans will die for u...!

JMeh chapter 7 . 9/6/2010
Kinda pissed now ya kno...?

Hate how things turned out, i really do. But meh, i'll read it to the end. I mean, not all stories are happy.

This is just wat i asked for _ a realistic-ish story. Finally where not everything is sparkly love love.
JMeh chapter 6 . 9/6/2010
Son of a bitch.

_ stupid Yamcha...
JMeh chapter 5 . 9/6/2010
Yay...! In ur face Yamcha!

Heh... He tells the parents that Vegetta is a blood thirsty alien, watch the parenrs arent guna b surprised. Haha, watch, they probably helped.

Awww... Am i noticing Vegeta turning nicer...?
JMeh chapter 4 . 9/6/2010

YAMCHA IS JEALOUS..! This will add more to story plot...! YESH!

JMeh chapter 3 . 9/6/2010

no fackinf way...? He made the chip...? When i read that lil summary for the chp before i thot. Vegetta helped out by being a lab rat.

DAMN... wut a twist...! Wow...
JMeh chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
Nice fight scene.

Gave me just enough but wasnt drowning in detail. I like ir! :) and the lil hints of wuts to come nxt...!
JMeh chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Ooouuuu...! :D

Those were fast witty comments...! Aha, thats wut i imagine. _

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