Reviews for Waiting, Wanting, Watching
Zapphe chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
Not bad for a quick story but I'm sure about the Watching bit, it's a bit pervy'ish and I'm not sure if it adds anything to the story.
Amanda Wilder chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Great antidote for Eclipse! Thanks for writing.
notashamedtobe chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
Cool beans and love that Ed's a voyeur at the end. ;)
Stephlite chapter 3 . 1/3/2010
That was awesome. Great short!
wordslinger chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
This is hot. I can't say I'd be able to look away either. But, I'm a sicko, so...
TeamJacobYeah chapter 3 . 12/22/2009
Wow, I get to be first? This was totally HOT! And so much like I would have liked things to be for Jacob and Bella. Awesome chaps, would love to read more. Thanks.