Reviews for To Be Loved |
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![]() ![]() So... Because he didn't want to be "seen as a tyrant" Dumbledore that could have easily end Fudge's coup right here, right now, decided to let an actual tyrant take full control of the country ? Well he is an idiot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. A wonderful tale. Draco122 |
![]() ![]() ![]() So harry told dumbles about the graveyard scene, like minutes after it happened... and no one thought to go to the graveyard right then? What fucking bs.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm... it's nice the adults are doing something for once but I find myself disenchantedfirst the not doing the trials and now the basilisk being killed by three professors while Harry got his ass kicked. I understand it's much realistic but it just feels wrong. and I can't help but think that him killing the snake for its part in harming Daphne would've gone a long way for their friendship. I'll keep reading for now but it honestly feels like I'm reading a watered down version of the story. doesn't feel very fantastical or anything. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved every moment of reading this. Despite the simple premise, I might even go as far as to say that this is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've read. It's at least in the top 3. Voldemort and Lucius'-as well as Fudge's-political maneuvering was realistic and intelligent. Harry's relationship with Dumbledore was wholesome and Dumbledore was written extremely well and imo very close to the intended canon for his character. I loved the interactions between and the progression of the relationship between Harry and Daphne; they were amusing and tastefully written. And Snape was perfect, too. I especially liked his end and his place in the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic has probably one of the best imperio use cases in how it can totally destabilize society. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this isn't going to be a canon rehashThankfully this wasn't a play by play copy, but I'm tired of going through canon plot again and again lol. Thanks for writing~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazinh read , loved it |
![]() ![]() It's feeling like Harry and Hermione have read the script and just waiting for the right moment to speak and act. Sadly that means the writing isn't very good, author. |
![]() ![]() I had to read the last sentence twice and I was glad I did. What a beautiful way to end the story of two love hungry kids. Thank you for making me smile today and I hope someone has done the same for you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not for me. Reviews are making it sounds like a genius story. Pretty mild/simple from my point of view. There are quite a few good ideas tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unlike many reviewers I found this story to be very bland and in many ways was very unoriginal. I was expecting some sort of relationship between Daphne and Harry but there was a total lack of development and it just happened. It really didn't need the first fifteen or so chapters that were little more than book rehash with slightly different charasycters. Overall I couldn't fault how it was written just the whole concept of what was written was so frustrating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Actually loved your version of Dumbledore! Thanks for sharing! |