Wow what a chapter. So much loss and heroism. Thank you for sharing your story

I am really enjoying your story and how the plot has diverged from canon. I like how each change logically follows the other changes and doesn’t feel forced by the narrative. Thank you for sharing your story

This was one of the best Haphne stories and a phenomenal AU story in general. I loved that you didn’t follow the typical ‘Dumbledore bashing and Molly/Ron bashing’ cliche in other pairing for hp fics. I adored this one version of Dumbledore and was quite sad at his death. As well as enjoyed that this Harry wasn’t’dark’ but only using those spells to protect others. Overall, it’s one of those fics I will enjoy rereading again

This is an amazing story, definitely one of the best HP fics I've read on this site. While it wasn't the focus of the story, this is probably the best romance I've ever seen in a fanfic. I loved how their relationship developed in, at least, a pseudo-realistic way, and how the reader could see them getting closer as the years went on.
10/10 fic, great job.

Overall I found this to be a very interesting piece. I enjoyed how differently things developed from the very start. I also quite liked how Harry had embraced his intelligence and had a bit of a ruthless streak. He was definitely a grey character at the very least and Daphne definitely dipped into being dark. As for a first story I think you did an excellent job. The writing style isn't my favorite but it grew on me as the story progressed.

Interesting plot twists

That’s our boy

Get the girl to talk wth Hsrry and Hermione.

Good choice

Interesting opening. Switch up on the neglect

I loved this story and I liked the plot that you proposed for Harry and Daphne, on the one hand, I am glad that Daphne has not been involved in blackmail or something like that, as abounds in many other , I must admit that the deaths of Sirius and Dumbledore did hurt. Also, the fact that Harry killed Snape without hesitation, without knowing the truth... Man, there you realize that Daphne is the column that supports Harry.

Overall pretty good, even though I'm not personally a fan of all the political shenanigans. Snape's fresh was kinda forced, silencing him was kinda OoC imo.

This chapter was ridiculous.

. vol de mort would not have asked for Snape's help and he would not have allowed Bellatrix to help either, he's too prideful for that.

Wizards are a fickle lot.