I really liked this story until you decided to do a canon rewrite of harry allowing a killing curse to hit him. That pretty much ruined the whole story for me seeing as how all of the changes you made before seem insignificant if the ending is still the same.

Thanks for the story!

So, do I understand it correctly? That Harry must never see Severus's memory because then he would feel so guilty? A little darker story than I generally like to read but it was well written. I followed a story recommendation.

What was the point of putting Harry into a game and almost killing him, if he's up and about the next day?

Great story line and writing, BUT the author committed murder with some characters, namely Snape.

The plot with fudge was brilliant, so much so that part of me was actually going for Voldemort. Also I loved how Dumbledore kicked Voldemort's butt. however, another bad part of this story was how much destruction there was, there was almost nobody worthwhile in the wizarding world to continue going on for, and the society was destroyed.
Overall, it was a great story but I liked the beginning better than the end.

I enjoyed your work very much. Thank you

Very enjoyable story. Well written as a bonus. Thank you.

I liked how fast paced everything was, no unnecessary details. Didn't really like this Harry, specially about the belguian dude and killing Snape, even though that was Dumbledore fault too for not telling him. Really sad.

1st thing I would have done is head to the US or Canada after all that. Leave that cesspool of corruption and sheep that is the European Wizard world behind.

The ICW basically supported Voldemort, with France and Belgium providing overt support. I’m surprised Harry wasn’t pissed at them. I certainly would’ve been.

This might be the most forced romance on this entire site.

Thirst for power isn’t a trait of Ravenclaws. That’s more of a Slytherin trait.

I’m just concern why did you not want Harry not known of Snape’s sacrifice. Isn’t that a disservice to Snape after you make him likable throughout this story. You are not making sense at all with that action. Seriously it’s very illogical.

Absolutely amazing

Nice, very AU!