Reviews for The Fallen
NewmanElhabroukH chapter 10 . 1/4/2011
I STILL HATE YOU! YOU KILLED TOMMY! MURDERER!

sorry i just got mad cuz he is my fav char. & the whole thing of you making him get hit by a car that ripped him in half lower half from upper half at the tender age of 15 not even a first kiss or loss of virginity in sight well that plain sucked and now i will have nightmares & insomnia for about 3 days so sorry if im rude
NewmanElhabroukH chapter 9 . 1/4/2011
YOU KILLED TOMMY! WWWAAAAAHHHHH I WAS ACTUALLY ONE OF HIS FANS TOO WWWWAAAAHHH *pant sniffle sniffle shattering of my heart thud* [chibi] wow you got her so sad she passed out and I was a fan of Tommy too WWWWWWAAAAAAHHHH{cries of chibi and(once she wakes up 2 hrs later)newmanh echo on for 3 weeks}
NewmanElhabroukH chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
I AM NOT A FAN OF JP EITHER BUT STILL WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY! DO YOU HAVE TO KILL THEM WOULD IT BE THAT HARD TO MAKE OTHER OCs!

sorry i got a little upset its just digimon was my first anime series and though I watched adventure, adventure 02, and tamers first your killing of characters from a show i will never grow tired of again gomen nasai *bows REALLY low*
NewmanElhabroukH chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
WHY WHY WHY? DID YOU HAVE TO KILL KOICHI? I MEAN I'M NOT A FAN OF HIM BUT STILL!WWWWWWWWAAAAAAAHHHHH KOUJI LOST HIS TWIN WWWWWWWAAAAHHHH!

please bring him back... somehow...? oh and sorry for my outburst

:(
MichiruxRyosuke chapter 10 . 5/22/2010
My suggestion : Write both xD

I was hoping that the final chapter would be more epic and longer, but, yeah, good one. please write some more stories. (ANGEWOMON RYONA!)
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 10 . 5/2/2010
Whoa... That was a harsh ending...

Anyways, even it's harsh... I still like the ending... but it still a sad one...

I like Apocalypse Strikes... I want violence... joke, I just like the story...
blackandblood chapter 10 . 5/2/2010
Oh, my god! That was so good _ I loved the action...the blood...the bullets...the swords...the blood, haha. I can't wait to see the epilogue. And as for your upcoming stories, I think you could do the one-shot first since it's shorter and easier to do, followed by Apocalypse Strikes. Keep up the good work _
Kyosucke NanbooKyo Suckuragi chapter 9 . 2/27/2010
What's the matter? Not getting enough reviews? So desperate for them? Accepting anonymous reviews now? WAHAHAHAHA! Maybe that's because your fics are so sucky that reading the first word is more effective than a lullaby! About the lemon scene, I assume that you've never done THAT before so you don't know how to write one? Simple! Just go _ yourself alright? Loser!

A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement. Then again you're so ignorant. Unable to accept the fact that you suck a lot in writing. How will you learn? You even forgot the names of your characters! (bo) She's Saori not Saomi remember? Some guy like you with no memory at all should just sleep than to waste time writing stupid stories.

Where are the Digimon in a Digimon fanfic? What happened to TOB? If you were to post it and delete it, just don't post it! Think about all the time wasted! Stop writing and go eat some shit! It's tasty!

Dude, don't copy lyrics from songs. If you're good enough, create one. What am I saying? You never will! All you do is COPY COPY COPY and COPY!

Angry now? WAHAHAHAHAHA! Then unleash the demon within you, Kyosuke. Or should I say... Kyoshiro?
blackandblood chapter 9 . 2/26/2010
Well, good to know that Kouji and Saomi got some action. Best way to de-stress other than drinking and taking drugs. The fight scene was awesome and the ending was so sad... Why, Ryuu? Why did you have to die? No! Anyway, I look forward to see what happens next. See ya later
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 9 . 2/25/2010
Nice chap...

That was so sad that Ryuu died... SAD T_T

Anyways, that's fie for me if you're updating a late time...

Update when you can...
Royal Court Jester chapter 9 . 2/24/2010
I don't know what to say...it was awesome! the fight, the action the drama! and I don't know if it was supposed to be funny but I laughed at this "Ryuu smelled that Saomi had lost her virginity"

it was funny cuz it sounded nasty hahahaha, I know the fluids have a stench (personal experience) but I didn't knew Ryuu could smell that good!

Ryuu: who did this?

Saomi: stop smelling me you pervert!

okay that was the last joke, promise.

it's bad that Ryuu died like that, I mean he did a great effort and he died...like Tommy he doesn't had a chance, poor kid

well since a teacher is behind me I better get going, see ya man

glad you're...not dead, take care dude
MichiruxRyosuke chapter 8 . 2/18/2010
Whoo! Lemon! Nice!
MichiruxRyosuke chapter 7 . 2/18/2010
Wait, is this a sequel to Raven?
utsukushii04 chapter 8 . 2/5/2010
Oh such a sweet chapter! The next chap will be a lemn huh...*covers eyes*...Oh, well! Update soon!
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 8 . 2/5/2010
Aw... That was soo sweet... _

Like this one... and it's more romantic...

Anyways, yeah, I agree on the chap's title... Love is Eternal... WE!

Update Soon...
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