Reviews for Time Flies
Alan Bates chapter 1 . 11/7/2002
Hey, I never thought of Epoch being "alive" but it does make sense. Good idea! Nice work! etc etc
GryphonRampant chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
Wow! That was fantastic! Once I figured it out, everything made sence! VERY well written! You write wonderfully! :)
AJ Andreason chapter 1 . 7/24/2002
Not bad at all! You had me fliting around, thing first it was Magus, the Gasper, the only

realizing it was Epoch about the fifth to last paragraph.

Never did like the "Kill Epoch" ending, though. I always stuck with the Black Omen. _

Write more of these. I like.
name chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
Very good... you gave an inanimate object a believable character! Kept me guessing!
Steve chapter 1 . 1/28/2002
This was a cool story; you keep up the excellent work.
asdfjklasdfjklasdfasdf chapter 1 . 1/22/2002
Don't beat yourself up. You've got some good skills, and i think that your POV writing worked well. Keep up the good stuff!
Tumbleweed chapter 1 . 1/21/2002
OOo! Nifty! Short, but sweet. Giving the Epoch a bit of intelligence is rather nifty- reminds me of a really Old Sci-Fi comic I read quite some time ago by the title of 'I Rocket'. I suggest you try writing something longer one of these days to see what you could do :)