Reviews for Metroid Prime: Delusion
Omega the Omniscient chapter 9 . 3/1/2012
Haha! Good to see another chapter of this story with the same great quality I expect. I reread the previous chapter too and now I miss Ghor. Still, Rundas ought to make things interesting, especially since he seems more aware than Ghor was of what's going on. The way things are going I can see a major pirate encounter coming soon. Looking forward to your next update. 8D
Omega the Omniscient chapter 8 . 3/13/2011
I see I was premature in my comment about the silence, but even with the added dialogue on Samus' part your writing style remains the same. This is good, because you write well.

It isn't necessary to make any note of it, but would Ghor be at all surprised at Samus' sudden willingness to speak?

I'm wondering if Ghor is conscience, or if his will can be subverted by the Phazon. Time will tell, I suppose.

I look forward to the next chapter! 8vD
Omega the Omniscient chapter 7 . 3/13/2011
Accursed login troubles... Anyways, I was going to wait to review until the eighth chapter, but my patience has failed me. I'm glad Ghor is back! He was my favorite character in Corruption, and I'm glad you chose to cure him of his corruption. I would theorize that, if this is the original Ghor and not some Phazon illusion, having been absorbed by Dark Samus, upon her death his essence could have been released and allowed to reincarnate? Of course the reality of it is left to you, the great author of this masterpiece, to decide.

Another thing about Ghor's presence is that it adds dialogue, which I enjoy. However, you write for the most part without dialogue. I am accustommed to dialogue, but you write very well even without it! Samus is portrayed well, I think although I haven't played the games enough to know beyond her silent nature. I also like your addition of a competent pirate with Trigger AM, but whether he will be competent in comparison to Samus and Ghor is yet to be seen. Keep up the good work! 8vD
BigBrotherIsWatching chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I have a idea where Dark Samus Returns and Creates 2 clones of himself one related to Ice and the other to fire
RedSkyTiger chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
This is already awesome so far.
Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
This is looking pretty good. Nice explanation for why it took awhile for Samus to show up at the recon area