Reviews for Broken
cnaheartsbotdf chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Oh my! Much sex such hot so yum! -melts- that was fantastically written! Glad I waited till I came home from school haha! Funnier part is that I could SO see Elizabeth saying that. -claps- I tip my hat to you.
cnaheartsbotdf chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
I'm going to torture myself and read chapter two when I'm not at school XDXD I LOVE the way this is. The way you described them both is so accurate and amazing and ugh! I can't wait til I read the second chapter. :) You're very good at writing, the sentences flow and your imagery/word choice is absolutely perfect.
ThatShadeWolf chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
Too perfect I loved it hope you get another part out soon...and I'm the same way with writing stories though...to be honest...I didn't see anything wrong...the sex scenes turned ne on so those were amazing so yea...there's that going for me...like the plot...if it...isn't finished I will stick it out till the end to see how it ends
Skarlettefox chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
Awkward ending...XD
Awesome!
LovelyPinkChocolate chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
What a fantastic story! :)

I wish you write more about Jack and Will :-D
AriaMirror1028 chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
Okay that was good. Loved the hillarious ending. You can't go wrong with Jack getting slapped by an attractive woman.
Uqluiorra12345 chapter 2 . 2/26/2012
LOL love the end xD
Tearful Shadows chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
Cool story. It was amazing! Wish there was more!
bruderlein chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
I've liked the ending... I mean Elizabeth's showing up... other way it was surprising..
xshieldmaidenx chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
I don't think the would have been as funny if I hadn't forgotten that Elizabeth was on the ship. XD So perfect, so amazing, and so hot 3
Rogue of Freedom chapter 2 . 5/19/2011
THEY HEARD1!

Me:I AM THE PIRATE QUEEN BOW BEFOR ME!

Yugi:Emoko get down!

Me:bow slave!

Yami:that is enough.

Me:okay.*sits down obiediently*
Adicius Seed chapter 2 . 3/3/2011
"Can I violate you, William?"

Bloody Hell! yes please, YES! Violate him all you want!... ok, ok I'll calm down.

I loved it! the whipping thing *poor William*, the sex part *OMGOODLORD!*, and Elizabeth! *LOL* Really, I liked it! Goes to my favs.

Thank you very much for this great story!
AvAtarAmeobA chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
:33333333
ScissorSheep chapter 2 . 12/23/2010
*laughs* wow this was a great story i loved it -
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
At last, a promising fic in my tentative journey within the realms of the Pirates fandom! Sexysexysexy, you're the closest person I know to have captured Jack Sparrow's voice. Love it, can't wait to go on
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