|Reviews for Payment|
| lunabloodmoon666 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Wow this is awsome lol I really wanna no more do please update lol :)))
| Daevanam Daevo chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I can't believe I overlooked the fact that Yako didn't get paid! Nice work!
| venG chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Loved your story! I always thought that Yako's mother's position is rather strange. I have an impression that even Yako's friends and total strangers as Sasazuka knew more about her life than her own mother. Your story kind of covers this manga gap.
PS: Neuro's first "okaa-san" was really hilarious :)
| Runaway Roadkill chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
O: I love it! The hard-headed line made me lol so much.
| Hawktopus chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Huh, I always wondered about Haruka's opinion of Yako's job two, but never considered the wages thing. You did a great job of explaining both!
| LuvStarWars chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Very interesting. I'd always wondered how Yako's mother could be so little involved in her daughter's detective work with a complete (and for the most part rather creepy) man. lol Honestly, if I was Haruka, I would have drilled Neuro when he first showed up. XD
This story is fabulous, you did a great job of explaining things, and I love how you portrayed Haruka. Neuro was spot on as well. _
| Papersak chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Ah, this is an interesting part of the story to look into. :0 I like how you characterized Haruka. Very nice fanfic
| SageofAges729 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Neuro might want to be careful...hell hath little fury like a mother in 'protect' mode. Interesting idea...I did sometimes wonder what the mom might think of Neuro. Keep up the good work!