Reviews for Bunny Hops
ktoll9 chapter 6 . 5/10
OMG! I absolutely LOVE this one. Great job! Thank you for writing it. 8)
devilsama666 chapter 6 . 2/4/2014
I love this one ! You are a genius , I'm so happy to have stumbled upon this ! Again great work !
lazyass out !
devilsama666 chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
All of these are fabulous , amazing really . My fav is actually chapter 4 because of the last sentence . It made me laugh so hard . Each of these would be good multi chaptered fic ! Good job !
lazyass out !
MisCelineous chapter 6 . 3/17/2010
Wow. I just finished reading the last chapter, and I can't help but crave that that was how Kyouko actually reacted. I mean, in a way, she wouldn't truely get revenge unless she beats Sho in his own game as well as through acting. Have you ever considered writing this as a multi-chaptered fic?
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 3/17/2010
Yet another plot that you should develop.
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
The last line was great!
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
Another interesting plot. Are you planning on pursuing any of these?

It's nice that in this one Kyoko seems to be interested, at least.
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
I like your twist on the original. People like Sho are too caught up in their own significance. If she had simply brushed him off he would have been crushed.

Having Shouko run after Kyoko was an poignant. Good job.
leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
So-o-o, were you planning on developing this mini-plot? You could write a whole short story entitled: Indifference.

There is an old quote that goes: The opposite of love is not hate. The opposite of love is indifference.
Firnlambe chapter 6 . 3/16/2010
mwahaha in your face Sho!

great chapter
Cactus2008 chapter 6 . 3/16/2010
This was such a fun piece! Would love to see this in the manga. It would be such a fitting way to crush Sho fully, in his chosen field no less. And to fool Ren successfully too. Wow! Thanks..
Cactus2008 chapter 5 . 3/15/2010
So angsty! Yet, can't help feeling that of all people, Ren should be able to see through Kyouko's mask. Sigh...
Firnlambe chapter 5 . 3/15/2010
:( aw poor Kyoko

great chapter but *sigh* stupid Sho messing everything up lol
Firnlambe chapter 3 . 3/15/2010
aw i like this chapter a lot!

and if you ever found the motivation i think you should expand this one into a full story (even if it is a little bi cliche' lol)
ripinpeaces chapter 5 . 3/14/2010
This chapter was both hauntingly poignant and wonderfully beautiful. I loved the last line, because it really showed how broken the two of them are. I love all of your oneshots; some of them really would make great full out stories! And the previous reviewer is right, I don't know why this isn't getting more reviews. These oneshots are fantastic. I look forward to more of your updates!
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