Reviews for The Dessert Deficiency
BloodDove01 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
The story was cute! But,I dont get it... Was Yue molting? Or did Touya pull out the feathers? I'm a little confused there. Could you tell me?

With Love

Lady BloodDove

transmigratory chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Haha, I loved this. The whole thing made me smile. I can picture every moment of it.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
green aura chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Magnificent... It's quite catchy... funny... and has lots of the old feel... I really like it! Dunno when is this happening, where and why Yue is out instead of Yukito, and I dunno if you plan to keep on writing more chapters for this little fic, but this lonely chapter is good enough to make me smile and laugh a bit after a boring day :P... Nice one dear... I hope you continue the story

Oh by the way... I know the wings played a lot on the chapter... but can't you remember that he can retract them? XD... Well I was just pointing out the obvious... but that little forgotten fact made the chappie nice! Thanks for writing this!


green aura