|Reviews for Payback is Customary|
| Tungscrus chapter 1 . 2/8
I have my next Fan Fiction story if you want to read it. It is called "Fears and Failure". Please let me know what you think and your favourite part.
| Amethyskye chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Brilliantly done. You really captured the dialog style and the relationships between characters, and I find that actually quite rare among most fan-fic'ers. So well done and keep it up!
| Bibbibabka Ditty chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
This story was Great! Twinki is so mean and its just like him to take advantage of poor Balki. I cant wait for your next story!