Reviews for The Accidental Bond
FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 4/29/2014
I prefer Danielle and Rupert for her parents names.
sanabalis chapter 33 . 4/20/2014
Great and beautiful story!
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 4 . 4/10/2014
Damm that. Teasing... you what flamel destroyed, didnt have too either...
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
The conversion rate you are using is insane...

with that harrys wand would cost around 150% of what i gave for my ps4...

4200 and 6400 dkk...

i gave 7,5k for my laptop...

it might just be that the HP newspapers are cheaper since they maybe have existed for longer time...
ex-ellent chapter 6 . 4/6/2014
The story was good, until you did that magical bonding thing with Ginny as well. To be honest I find that rather pathetic. And I can already see Harry will because of that stay at Hogwarts, for me it kills the story. I'm sorry.
meanie chapter 9 . 3/24/2014
I quite like your story. I was a bit 'meh' at the start but I think your writing improved slightly as the story progressed however if you make Harry a descendent of ANY of the founders (especially on Lily's side) I will flame your story so bad that you could tell it was burning from a mile away even if you blind and deaf of course that's only if
AnthonyR89 chapter 33 . 3/22/2014
talking about gabrielle possibly committing suicide and how that would make it easier on the others is a little...morbid. not too mention completely unlike your previous characterizations in the story.

entertaining story overall, though i think harry would have been smart to snap the elder wand as soon as he got it.

as for your comments about "Ginny-Hate" on your profile, honestly, the only hp characters i actively dislike are Dumbledore, Snape, Ron, and Molly. i'm indifferent to Percy for the most part. and even with those characters, i don't really have a problem reading stories with them being portrayed in a positive light, so long as they're well written and pretty much ignore their cannon personalities.

Dumbledore is a manipulative old S.O.B. that's as bad as Voldemort himself, Snape is a petty little man, Ron is his generation's answer to Wormtail, and Molly is overbearing.
Anon chapter 26 . 3/19/2014
HUGE fact miss: On Harry's first visit to the Vault, they said he couldn't take anything with him. Presumably, this includes money. Now, he took money with him? Yeah... Something's wrong there.
AnthonyR89 chapter 17 . 3/21/2014
noticed another slight error. you have cormac mclaggen being a sixth year. he was still at hogwarts during Half Blood Prince, meaning he's a fifth year.
AnthonyR89 chapter 13 . 3/21/2014
interesting story so far. one thing though: why is hermione talking about what classes to take next year when they are already in third year? and why is she debating the merits of Arithimancy and Divination when she's already decided to not take Divination and Muggle Studies, as mentioned in a previous chapter?
Anon chapter 26 . 3/18/2014
I'm gonna take a wild guess that the "what would Sirius say?" answer to Harry's dilemma is, "Perhaps you could be the stay-at-home Dad." *evilgrin*
LoonyLovegood chapter 17 . 3/18/2014
Why do I have a feeling that Fluer is going to become a bond mate and that the whole reason you are thinking of having them go to that school is because it is convienent? Its the wrackspurts, isn't it?
Anon chapter 11 . 3/8/2014
A much better wording for Harry's summary of his abuse: "Sir, harmed is harmed, whether it's by a Death Eater's wand or my cousin's fist or my uncle calling me a freak or my aunt starving me."
lisa.francis.96780 chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
I was really hoping Ginny would not be one of the girls. I don't hate her but neither do I like her and I don't like her with harry.
Caraline Fisher chapter 18 . 2/15/2014
It's sort of implied that it's up north more than Hogwarts. But since they don't say you can do whatever you want and no one will really care too much! Good story by the way
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