|Reviews for Angel At My Table|
| sassy41 chapter 11 . 3/14/2010
well my heart is pounding. love that she gets to spend quality time with edward. i can't believe she is leading him on, now that is wrong. i understand she is afraid of carlisle and that is why she doesn't say anything but it is still wrong. Part of me thinks edward will not talk with her and will be so pissed. then I think no tanya is back that she will find out bella's secret and somehow take the kids and bella will be forced to tell edward about his children because they will be looking for skankaya because she took them. he will be so concerned that his kids are with psychoanya that he puts off his anger for bella until they are found. I just don't see it working out happily anytime soon. Man my head hurts. I love the story though
| rpattz granny chapter 8 . 3/14/2010
I want to kick edward ass
| robfans chapter 10 . 3/14/2010
its good that edward get rid of tanya
| Mrs Boyscout chapter 10 . 2/25/2010
Oh yeah, that was totally a cheap ass escape on Bella's party. Promising to talk "tomorrow" and then high tailing it out of there before morning. Can't wait to read what's next. There is so much drama ahead! Woohoo. Great chapter. Loved your song choices. :)
| pillow912 chapter 10 . 2/23/2010
| joice84 chapter 10 . 2/23/2010
this is exactly what I call the reunion! Im so anxious for the next chapter that I will not sleep until he comes...thanks for the reunion I do not think I could endure more hurt, now the to look forward to the agony at the least they are close I loved the lemon!I hope have more ;D
| Teresa R chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
They are back together at least for one night now he must hunt her down and never let her go. I was so excited when they seen each other. She need to think about the way he talked to her one could see he was seeing it as more than a one night stand wake up Bella. More More More
| sassy41 chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
okay I can breathe.
I am a little curious and I do not mean to be nit picky. But isn't bella nursing the twins or is she done. I know I nursed my kids up to a least 2 and I know I leaked at times. I know sick sorry but especially with the kids being gone she would be full and to have stimulation you would think the milk would be flowing. I know edward did notice her breast where enlarged. Little does he know. Man I know you are going to kill us and drag out the kids. God give me the stregnth now. He has alot of making up to do. She keeping the kids from him but he did call her a mistake and he never looked back. So I can see he rpoint. The both have valid points for doing the shit they did. OMG I so love it, thank you
| lorries chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
He no lynch party for Bella she's just scared.
I mean how is she going to tell him that he is a daddy.
How will he take that news? I sure hope he doesn't give up on her. I'm really excited about what's going to happen now.
So I hope you update soon.
I must ask "Dutch courage" is that really an expression?
Never heard of it.
Keep up the good work.
| JannieG chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
OMG I can't believe you left us hanging again. At least they hooked up for a little while. I can't believe she left him like that. Especially knowing he tried several times to talk to her- what the hell? Oh poor Edward. I guess he had it coming- He should have done the right thing to begin with. I like the sexual tension and the struggle to be together but I am SO ready for them to be a family! Hurry
| VERY IMPORTANT PLEASE READ chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Very IMPORTANT! Please,please read through whole review post
It's not even Fanfiction admistrators who are causing this problem but a groups of snot-nosed, kids, mostly boys with god-like complex who run a hate group called Literate Union.
Please feel free to use all this info with in an Author's Note if you like or send it to all your loyal readers, ask them to pass this message verbatim however they can, or ask them to send this email to FanFiction admin at reportabuse . There is also a petition, please sign at /s/5734048/1/Petition
I don't know why the Twilight authors and fans are not fighting back and are letting the Literate Union get their way and win. As a result I've seen many terrific authors taking their stories to many different sites and leaving FanFiction. All the hard work and time authors put in to write stories put to waste with fewer readers following.
This is the email that I sent fanfiction about the attacks from the scum who run Literate Union.
/u/599541/ - Lord Kelvin – Moderator for the Literate Union
/u/1600268/Georgasaurus - Georgasaurus/kittysaurus - Co-Founder of the Literate Union
/u/1935085/ - Ever heard of a dictionary – Co-Founder of the Literate Union
The three accounts and two forums above are violating the terms of service for fanfiction.
The TOS say in Section 7B: " reserves the right to decide whether Content or a User Submission is appropriate and complies with these Terms of Service for violations other than copyright infringement or privacy law, such as, but not limited to, hate crimes, pornography, obscene or defamatory material,or excessive length. may remove such User Submissions and/or terminate a User's access for uploading such material in violation of these Terms of Service at any time, without prior notice and at its sole discretion." A hate crime is defined as: a crime if it involves the use
(or threat of use) of force, intended to hurt and intimidate. Obscene is defined as: offensive to one's feelings, lewd. And, defamatory is defined as:defaming or tending to defame; slanderous.
The Literate Union takes part in hate crimes and obscene or defamatory material. They target authors who write in certain genres and they take it upon themselves to “constructively criticize” them by telling these authors that they cannot write and that their story is crap. They also leave spam reviews that have nothing to do with the stories. The obscene/defamatory material that they partake in includes, but is not limited to:
Georgasaurus (now known as kittysaurus)
2010-02-01 . chapter 19
"I look forward to this story being deleted and two authors leaving the site. Reposts of chapters are against the rules, and so you are reported again.
Co-Leader of the Literate Union
2010-02-01 . chapter 19
Posting non-story chapters is illegal on FFN. You are ripping off your readers by providing them no content, but still wishing to generate review 's comparable to getting a candy wrapper instead of of you novices can squirm as much as you wish, but this story was supposed
to be rated MA. MA was forbidden on this site for years, so I wish the poster and the public a good trip to adult fan fiction dot net. They host such uploads and offer plenty of competition for an aspiring senseless smut uploader. There,
you won't need to mask your story as something friendly to underage individuals. Consider redirecting your complaints to Georgasaurus in the Literate Union forum.
Have a nice, abuse-free day."
The Magic Flying Walrus
2010-02-02 . chapter 1
"Tell me, Shannon, how's your son doing? Does he know you can't write for crap? Oh, the shame he'll feel when he realizes his mother is so bad at writing, she has to write cheap smut that has no excitement factor at all. It's as if a large, invisible hand has picked up your characters and started smacking them together, like a child playing house
with her favorite dolls."
This last review was the worst of them all. This person went to my profile and used the personal information I shared with fanfiction and then wrote this “review” and left it for all to see. All of these reviews are considered spam and are harassing, obscene, and are defamatory. Although two of the reviews pointed out my mistakes, I did correct my story and it now complies with the guidelines.
The forums that these people hide under are just masks for their work against the authors and stories that the people in the Literate Union deem unworthy. They take it upon themselves to police the site and look for stories that they think are unacceptable in terms of spelling, grammar, plot, or content.
Then, the Literate Union sends mass emails to their members and post links in their forums so that the other members and non-member people who hang out in their forums can click on the link and report the stories numerous times. They even have members as young as 13 who are asked to click on links to M rated stories and report them. M rated stories are only appropriate for ages 16 and up. By asking these young members
to visit M rated stories they are engaging in the act of Contributing to the Delinquency of a Minor.
The excuse of the Literate Union is that the content on should be acceptable for any age and that anyone will click on the stories. May I present this information?
Stated in section 5F: "You understand that when using the Website, you will be exposed to User Submissions from a variety of sources, and that is not responsible for the accuracy, usefulness, safety, or intellectual property rights of or relating to such User Submissions. You further understand and acknowledge that you may be exposed to User Submissions that are inaccurate, offensive, indecent, or objectionable, and you agree to waive, and hereby do waive, any legal or equitable rights or remedies you have or may have
against with respect thereto, and agree to indemnify and hold , its Owners/Operators, affiliates, and/or licensors, harmless to the fullest extent allowed by law regarding all matters related to your use of the site."
The Literate Union argues that the material in the stories that they oppose and object to is offensive, indecent, and objectionable. Yet, fanfiction’s TOS state that each person may be exposed to that kind of material and they waive any rights. These people have no right to police the stories on
fanfiction and report them numerous times in one day just because the information was offensive, indecent, and/or objectionable.
The icing on the cake of this group is that they consider themselves above the rules and regulations that they attempt to enforce. The co-founder, Georgeasaurus, has a swastika on his profile which falls in with the hate crimes. And, one of their members, NaLaaSt has a pornographic story posted.
These people, these self proclaimed literate people, need to be stopped and their actions ceased. They have targeted a number of fanfiction authors and are attacking them through organized mass emails to the members asking them to contact the author and leave mean comments on their reviews and in private messages, and they repeatedly report the stories they deem unacceptable. One member even admitted to reporting a story over 25 times in a few days. That is harassment and stalking and should not be acknowledged or allowed.
Many popular authors have had to pull their stories or have had them deleted because of the Literate Unions actions. These authors are moving to other site and pulling large numbers of readers with them. This is taking away from and will continue to happen if the Literate Union is allowed to continue with their actions and forums and profiles.
The main fandom that the Literate Union targeted is the Twilight community. The Twilight community has been involved in numerous fund raisers including Fandom Gives Back for Alex’s Lemonade Stand and The Haiti Compilation where over $80,0 was raised for Haiti Earthquake Relief. I was one of those authors who participated. The Twilight community has a voice and we do make a difference.
Stop the Literate Union. Delete their forum and let the people on fanfiction rest easy that they will not be targeted unnecessarily. The Literate Union even has a list of stories in a thread on their forum that they are working to have removed. They are acting like the Nazi Regime and should not be allowed to continue with their actions. If they continue then will lose many loyal authors and readers.
Fanfiction is our home; please do not let us be run out of it by some bullies masking themselves as the Literate Union.
It is my understanding that also created . If was as easy to navigate and post on as then many authors would be happy to move their submissions there. However, it is difficult to post on and to navigate. If is not affiliated with adultfanfiction then fanfiction should either include an NC17 rating or an MA rating or completely remove the M rating altogether. The lines are too blurry and many authors are having their hard work stripped from them because they do not know the specific line where a story crosses from M to MA/NC17.
Please fix fanfiction, whether it be by adding a new rating or removing the M rating and by getting rid of the Literate Union. They are giving your site a bad name and reputation and running off many authors and fans.
| LadyExcalibur2010 chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
Really? I should have known you'd drag out the torture. And what a delicious torment it is! Loved the update. But you know what we really want, right? That's right, we want Edward to meet his son and daughter. Hopefully that isn't too far away and won't be too traumatic for everyone.
| mountainlion718 chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
i can't believe she freaking left!, she knew from the get go that she was gonna use him tonight (granted it's what she feels he did to her, but that's besides the point) two wrongs don't make a right. i really hope when he gets up that he'll go after her. i want him to see the kids, but he will have no right to be pissed at her for keeping them from him, all that anger should be directed at Carlisle. i can't wait for the both of them to give him whats coming to him with both barrels! (and if Em, Jazz and Esme wanna get a few licks in as well, the more the merrier)
| snowyland chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
Thank you thank you... *smooch*
they finally did it!
ohh sweet Bella sneaking out of his room
cant wait for the update!