Reviews for You, Yours, You Blueberry Eggs
crosswire chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
I'm really enjoying the story so far. I hope you continue it, I love the title too! Blueberry Eggs just has such a bizarre ring to it.

It's been two years since you updated, but I REALLY hope you'll consider continuing things. My only suggestion is to maybe try to make the chapters a little longer? Short and sweet is nice and the detail you've given is great so far but maybe you could length them a little by adding some more details?

I'm not too terribly good at giving suggestions.
Lolikon chapter 5 . 1/6/2010
hm, is this the end or what?

This chapter went unexpectedly somewhat well.

Have you tried watching a lot more fansubs to understand Japanese language, customs, etc?
Lolikon chapter 4 . 1/6/2010
This is quite a bit amusing. But I feel that the narrator's feelings of frustration and humiliation was almost genuine enough but the way you described the mood of the teacher guy is so short, I would think that he was just acting.

By the way, I thought "dude" is for guys and dudette is for girls.
Lolikon chapter 3 . 1/5/2010
hm, nice. This is too short for fun-reading but still a nice chapter.
Lolikon chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
I thought Chieko would have been Suzuki's student. Oh, Bummer.

The principal is supposed to address the teacher Suzuki "sensei" not "san".
Lolikon chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
hm, what a creative story you have written here. The first chater is really short for a beginning of the story but this is a decent introduction to the story.

Now I am getting interested.