Reviews for The Fall
sfulton229 chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Whew! Boy that took a lot to get the team back together and Ezra really had a lot of pain and suffering but it worked! Love Josiah putting his foot down and Chris taking the opportunity to apologize. Thanks so much for this part and the happier ending. Looking forward to more!
sfulton229 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Wow, wonderfully evil idea! Hank did a terrific job destroying the one thing Chris had left. That one little doubt really preyed on Chris and put things in motion that Chris just didn't stop. I can see why Buck would be so hurt and why Chris wouldn't back down. Poor Ezra tried his best but just couldn't make it work. So sad that he is in the hospital alone and with no reason to live. Very evil spot to leave it and the evil laughter just reinforced that. Thanks for posting and glad to see another part.
SivanShemesh chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Nice that the team is now together. Though you make me want to read the sad ends... can you send it to me or post it. I want to read it.

Thank you for writing, and i hope to read more of your stories - Mag7 more likely... grin...

Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great weekend and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh
SivanShemesh chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
This is very evil of you... gladly i do not need to wait for another chapter... grin...

Thank you for writing it. Keep writing.

Merry Christmas sweetie.


See you in Chapter 2... grin...

Sivan Shemesh
subtleshadeofgrey chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Loved this and so glad that you gave in and made it a happy ending. A sad ending would make me sad at Christmas and you wouldn't want that would you?...oh! I forgot, you're evil LOL Very nice idea to view events not only from Ezra's point of view but from a totally emotion led standpoint. Poor Ezra, always the one to suffer most from others problems - hope Chris learned who his true family is. Thanks for a lovely read.