|Reviews for Avatar:Rebirth Chronicles|
| Jack Hawthorne chapter 5 . 11/29/2010
Absolutely brilliant update, as usual
Very nice how you're building up for another exitement-top (please excuse me if that's the wrong word; I'm directly translating the norwegian equivilants, since I can't remember the proper english ones ) here. I'm looking forward to reading about Jake's plan
| Dracoess chapter 11 . 11/28/2010
Will Tsu'tey live or will he die? I hope that he would live and help Jake as his advisor while Jake become the clan Leader of the Omaticaya.
| Capito Celcior chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
Hmm...if you see the extended Blu-ray, you'll see that Parker actualy was AGAINST wiping out the Na'vi. When Quaritch moved out, he tried to stop them. He's not a nice guy, but also not the monster you portray him as. Quaritch overruled him, however, saying that when Parker had given him the green light to move the Na'vi, it became a code red and his military command became priority over PArker's.
Parker tried to fire them, but hey...
He's pretty spineless, he doesn't respect Na'vi culture or understands their refusal to movem but he's not a total monster.
Still, that was only revealed after this chapter came out, so...
| KevinTranOfAdvancedPlacement chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
| Bigoldfrog chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
Another superb chapter. I really felt Neytiri's reaction to Jake being in a wheelchair.
| Bigoldfrog chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Absolutely amazing re-write of this epic scene. I love the thought processes of Jake when Quaritch accuses him of betraying his own race; it seemed to evoke an emotional response akin to what the movie did.
| Jack Hawthorne chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
Absolutely brilliant update, as usual. Well worth the long wait
In my opinion, the Na'vi girl could be anyone... Even a romance interest for Norm, if you want that.
I seriously cannot find any flaw in the chapter at all, so I really don't have anything else to say xD
Keep it up, and happy halloween
| Dracoess chapter 10 . 10/9/2010
Oh WOW, Great Story So far, and I hope that you continue the story until it's ending.
| Jack Hawthorne chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
If I remember correctly, it's quite a long time since you updated this one, but it was well worth the wait
| Zuchu chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
Great chapter, I love your descriptive writing. I felt like I was there. I dunno, Neytiri sort of seemed flat compared to your other characters in this chapter, and we didn't see alot of her emotionally. Just something to work on before the next awesome chapter comes out.
| Jack Hawthorne chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
Really nice dude! I like the way you described Norm's trek through the jungle; very vivid.
| Dbucks893 chapter 2 . 5/2/2010
haha please leave Tsu'Tey out! But please, continue this story!
| Zandekar chapter 2 . 4/28/2010
In answer to your question at the beginning, I would like it if you would update the chapters and then make your changes on your free time in between writing new chapters. I really like this story and it's the first Avatar Fanfic I've seen. It's how i pictured the sequel to the movie to be like.
Good work, amazing description.
| laughingspider chapter 8 . 4/20/2010
I'm really enjoying this story!
| Zuchu chapter 8 . 4/15/2010
Hey, sorry I'm late to the party. I love what you've done with the story, and can't wait to see where you go from here. Your knowlege of medicine is great, and you really have a knack for description in your work. I would suggest adding a little more character development to the humans and Na'vi who aren't your main characters, I would like a more extended cast. Other than that, this is great.