|Reviews for The Melancholy of Muffy|
| DoubleKK chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I have one but of constructive criticism, though; I think you had Muffy describing her own appearance to us a litle too much. It was a bit awkward. But other than that, good job. :)
| Jean Cooper chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Poor Muffy. I squinted hard and I liked ;)
| xXLittle Rose AngelXx chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
I really liked this one. It was written very well. Great job!
| Moonlit Dreaming chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Aah, poor Muffy! She should definitely stick with sweet Jill, whether as a friend or something more. _
I particularly liked how it was quite ambiguous, and not too angsty. Merry Christmas!
| Shimmerleaf chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
This is really cute.
| Mage the Observer chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Not bad. Cute, but not too sugary.