Reviews for Melt
hmfanatics chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
nice story love it!
umbreonix chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Oh my gosh so cute! May's adorable, and the spelling! "speshil" Amazzing job!
Claire DuPont chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Adorable story, love it 3
AClassicExampleOfAnOnlyChild chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Tainted-Petals chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
So sweet! _
sumire.syrup chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Waaaaah haha this is so cute. May is so adorable!'n
Melissa43097 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Nice :DD
Butterfree chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Woah. First of all, let me say that this is the single fanfiction I've read that's captured Gray's character so effeceintly that I can honestly imagine him saying these things in the games. I'm always a bit annoyed at how other fanfictions express him as a tempermental redhead who hates girls and explodes at people every 2 minutes who try to talk to him just for the sake of creating a 'love-hate' relationship which could be achieved in better ways anyway.

Anyway, aside from describing Gray's character very well, Claire's person was also done quite well. She was slighlty void of a personality, but not too much to make her seem inhuman.

Good luck in any future writting and thanks for the read!

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
xo-emma-ox chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Omg I love this. SO much. :)
Anon chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Sooooo cute! (fangirls) Gray's love confession was adorable, and I love how it goes three words, two words, one word... I adored this.
Voice Number Seven chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
The end was definitely my favorite. May is SO cute. I love the way you write, never mentioned what words Claire wants but having it just as obvious all the same. The way it was set up was very nice, and I like the way you write.
LillyMeg-x-xlol chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
aw that is SO cute! absolutley loved it :)
The Random Artist chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Well, it's not really the holidays anymore, but all the same its beautiful. :'D
nlech16 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
DoubleKK chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Beautiful. :)
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