Reviews for Sway
Okinawa Girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Loved this little one shot! Very funny and cute! And I'm very glad that Gaara sorta won in the end!
Haipa Ookami chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
this was great lol actually made me laugh :) loved it!
CrystalLover chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Lol. I have nothing else to say but, lol.
flamxfox chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Sigh, let me just pretend that I'm Sakura right now.
yume girl 91 chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Love it! XD chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
This is great! :) I love how you capture all the different personalitys.

Very well done .
Dark Shining Light chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
LOL awesome job! But it should have been 7 men in my opinion since Rock Lee obviously has a crush on her lol! anyways, great job!
angel897 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
love it
Fire Lady C chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
vey good. u do very well since u have no knowlege of salsa dances. but u demostrated a visual clear images of different tastes of dancing of different guys which is great for the beginning of the story. i look forward to next chapter and if u want to know about dances, u should ask professionals who danxce which some of few will be glad to explain to you. but in conclusion, this story with dancing involved is way better that i ever read. thank you for your wonderful talent to write. :D
wingedmercury chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Aw, this story had me giggling. So cute:)
kk chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
(snickers) "deal with it" heh, i love this.
Baka-no-desu-21 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
I like the one-shot it's interesting and i knoe salsa is a passionate dance;)
Lady Icicle chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
AHHHH! SO CUTEEEE! And awesome. Then again, all the fics I've read that you've written are awesome :) Gooo MultiSaku! Woots. Lol.

Btw, just a few errors:

In the Sasuke part, it's not 'a-shoo-in' but a shoe-in. I think.

Then in the last part, I think that there are some typos, like in Itachi's line. Also, an octave refers to the pitch/ note that the voices are at, not the volume (You were referring to their volume and not their sound - for lack of a better word - right?)

Anyways, please please write some more awesome fics! Thanks ;)
RandomPerson chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
KIBA FTW. :D That's all I wanted to say.


Oh.. P.S. Love your story.



P.P.P.P.S Hilarious Thanks for the good laugh.

P.P.P.P.P.S Naruto and Gaara are cute matches for Sakura too :3
ninjaartticklejutsu chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
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