|Reviews for An interesting development|
| skyeza chapter 15 . 5/17
More please. Awesome read, really would love to see how it works out. As well as the two friends Dray and Blas. So could you please continue this story, I need to know where they go from here. Complete the story.
| Hainbuche chapter 15 . 5/10
das war eher gemeines füllmaterial. und das nennt sich eine tolerante hexe. naja sie ist christin oder so gut wie, was will man erwarten. hoffe, dass mit haary und rodolphus klappt noch irgendwie, die beiden sind so süß. und potter kann meinetwegen vom tintenfisch gefressen werden. schreibst du bitte bitte weiter? lg hayne
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 15 . 4/11
Please update this story soon!
| eris8656 chapter 15 . 3/12
A fun fic! I like this pairing!
| Deatherella chapter 15 . 2/22
Love your story, it's wonderful, please update soon
| samira vangola chapter 15 . 2/19
| StrawberryRocket chapter 15 . 2/4
I love this!
Really hoping for an update soon
| The-Rogue-Girl chapter 15 . 1/4
:( I wish there was more I really like your writing
| AnetteRuby chapter 15 . 12/17/2014
Oh God ...this story has everything...plot, characters and it's juicy...why did you stop...this sooooo goood...
You know during school Harry could take a nasty hit to the head(like a fault during a game) that will have bad consequences...you could make Harry, in summer ,when he gets back home..start having some weird fainting spells...at first no one is around he fell in the bathroom, then it happens in his bedroom, at some point his parents are out for a romantic night and he faints in the hallway...he wakes up feeling shaky and weak ...the next few days he and his parents could have a fight because he wants to see Rodolphus ,the next day after the argument he feels dizzy and he faints , his parents think he's faking again so they wait for him to wake up, then they punish him for trying to fool them again, Harry is to tired argue and he just let it happen...Another time he wakes up on the floor with his knees scraped and a dislocated shoulder/ a concussion/a broken bone..he fell on stairs ...the house elf tells Lily that Harry fell but she's not concerned...then things get worse Harry can't eat he feels too sick, starts having trouble focussing for more than a few minutes ...he has memory lapses(he could tell James once that dinner is ready then he forgets it and does it again, James thinks is a prank) ...or you could create a whole new disease that Harry could have contacted...Rodolphus could have a few busy days and cancells their date, or Bella could be in labour and he needs to be there ...anyway Harry will be neglected and he fells left out of everything ...he at some point treats James with a high dose of cold shoulder and refuses to even look at him or talk to him...Due to being alone he could take up learning something ...the twins could visit Harry and make him smile for a bit...
Lily's sister could invite Lily and James to their wedding ...Harry and James get in another fight, James is so enraged that he actually hits Harry which hits his hip on the furniture or falls on the glass coffee table, Harry feels betrayed, they were alone so he takes Harry to the muggle hospital because is closer and they don't figure out that Harry has the fainting spells ...
One day Harry feels numb and has no energy so he stays on his bed and looses contact with reality, he's completely retreated him in his mind, Lily or Sirius find him later with a blank expression on his face,the boy's hands are cold, and he doesn't react at all not even to a light in his eye, ...he recovers in a few hours at a doctor's advice to let him get out of it on his own...a few days after Lily decides to allow Harry to visit Rodolphus, but when he asks Harry about it Harry only has a look on confusion on it and asks why should he visit the doctor(he mostly forgot about Rodolphus) ...they might decide later that Harry is to contact a mind healer
| evenstarlily chapter 15 . 9/30/2014
I love it! Hope you plan on continuing this soon!
| DGfleetfox chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
What fun! i like it so far ;) Good pairing choice too, it seems pretty rare which is an absolute shame as I prefer unconventional couples by far.
| Haruka-Lin-sama chapter 15 . 6/18/2014
Oh , i love the way you can get Harry's personality. He is so cute , really like a minx to quote you. I like Rodolphus he is the bad boy/mad scientist type just love him. The reality of HP you portray is very realistic and charming to me. Making me want more. So I can't wait for the next chapter,
| charm13insomnia chapter 15 . 6/5/2014
cool fic looking forwards to the next chapter
| Kaya70 chapter 14 . 5/16/2014
Love it plz update
| rma24601 chapter 15 . 4/27/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE ME!