Reviews for Time Turns Elastic
Wooden Tulips chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Oh man...that would be a horrible way to come out to your parents and a horrible way to find out your kid is gay...Very well written.
SnowyHedwig chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Loved it. Awesome example! I really liked how the flashbacks were done, showing key moments in his life.
archie-01 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
What a great example of FML. I look forward to this being continued after the contest is over. I really hate to beg. BUT I will.

Thank you
mcsc2008 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Wow! Great story. Loved the way you worked in all the background. So nicely written. I really want to know if Edward is able to reconnect with his parents and if he's able to get beyond this and stay with Jasper. Guh. FML is right. Thanks for sharing. :)
sugar rae chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Great job on your prompt! Poor Edward.
twilightmom67 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I know you wrote this as an example for the FML contest, but I REALLY hope you decide to continue it!
LaViePastiche chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
awesome example entry! it was both very hot and very sad/sweet. i loved the flashback with mike newton and the porn - very realistically done - as well as the dance with bella - it was so sweet and cute.

great job!
mauralee88 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
You'd be surprised how many people get interrupted because of that damn "just in case" key.

Great fic. Truly a fml moment.
sessahhh chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Great job with this one! It was really funny (and just a little bit sad at the end). I hope you choose to continue this one after voting is over. Good luck with the contest!
evenflo78 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Great job! That was fantastic. I do hope you decide to expand more after the contest has ended. It was a great story!
PurdueLiz chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Holy crow, this was incredible. So sad, so touching, yet Jasper still staying by his side says so much. I do hope you might continue this after the contest. I would very much like to see them get some resolution!
OneCharlieGirl chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
What a horrible way for your parents to find out that you're having sex, let alone that you're gay. Hopefully things will work out for them - you *are* going to continue this, right?

Great story!
ky93 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
All I can say is I want more! I really hope you continue this, I desperately want to know what happens to Edward and Jasper! Great story!
Beans827 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Oh wow...well, I'm pretty sure parents walking in on any kid having sex or giving a b/j would be traumatic, but yeah, finding out that that he/she is gay at the same time...YIKES! But hopefully with time and a lot of talking, the parents will accept it and love their child no matter what. I hope that the case here! Great job telling this story. Very nicely done!
serendipitous imp chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Aw, I just ache for them! Yikes, what an FML moment to experience. Simply the thought of all the turmoil that's still forthcoming makes me cringe. Great story though, girl, and quite engaging!
21 | Page 1 2 Next »