|Reviews for A Lingering Memory|
| ABCsoup chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Aahh, this is amazing! Seriously, from the conversation with Ari at the beginning, to Ziva leaving him, regretting it, to the end, neither of them fully remembering... Perfect.
| Little bit of love chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! I love this story! I love it I love it I love it
| InsanityGoneMad chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
You're so good at Tiva *glares*. I'm sure Em loves it so it's a good thing you worked your arse off for it. And I'm sure your colleagues at the TRM understand that you had to write something for Christmas for a friend :P
| frozenfiery chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
i really think u should *cough* continue this story *cough*
| ClassynSassy chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
oh, that was really good.
| Ab55556 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Hay, I LOVE this!
Really is incredible.
Wonderful, completely different spin on how they met, and I love how they recognise certain little parts of each other when they go to NCIS.
I like the flashback with Ari near the beginning, and I ADORE the first paragraph.
I love how they'd never known each others names, or never seen each other in the light.
That makes it more mysiterious.
And more amazing :P
I really don't know what to say.
It was wonderful.
'One night stands aren't meant to feel like this'.
That was great, but it was interesting how she soon forgot him. I do think that the end part was my favourite.
The last little section.
I like how, although Ziva is so obviously interested in Tony at the club, she still stays true to herself and doesn't try to change to impress him. The feminism bit I mean.
Yeah, really great Hay, won't be long before I come back to re-read this!
| Rose Aarac chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I LOVE IT! Great one shot.
| zats chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
A very good story of what might have been how they orginally met. Wouldn't mind reading more.
| gsr4ever chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Cool idea. Nice job!
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I HATE you!
This makes me feel so much worse, because that was freakin' amazing!
You now understand what i'm like when i talk about tiva. I am like that right now, with less noise.
I love the long paragraph at the begiinning, and the Ari bit! And just
Feminism - lmao :P
'One night stand aren't meant to feel like this' Awh! Omg! I love you so much right now! Lingering memory...
It's sad and amazing and tivaey and you're amazing and i love and gah!
Brilliant, stunning, and of course i really like it!
Amazing. You're such a talented writer, and i'll tell you aagin even though i know you won't listen - you should write tiva more often.
MERRY CHRISTMAS HAY! I love you 33