Reviews for A Lingering Memory
ABCsoup chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Aahh, this is amazing! Seriously, from the conversation with Ari at the beginning, to Ziva leaving him, regretting it, to the end, neither of them fully remembering... Perfect.
Little bit of love chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! I love this story! I love it I love it I love it
InsanityGoneMad chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
You're so good at Tiva *glares*. I'm sure Em loves it so it's a good thing you worked your arse off for it. And I'm sure your colleagues at the TRM understand that you had to write something for Christmas for a friend :P

frozenfiery chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
i really think u should *cough* continue this story *cough*
ClassynSassy chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
oh, that was really good.
Ab55556 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009

Hay, I LOVE this!

Really is incredible.

Wonderful, completely different spin on how they met, and I love how they recognise certain little parts of each other when they go to NCIS.

I like the flashback with Ari near the beginning, and I ADORE the first paragraph.

I love how they'd never known each others names, or never seen each other in the light.

That makes it more mysiterious.

And more amazing :P

I really don't know what to say.

It was wonderful.

'One night stands aren't meant to feel like this'.

That was great, but it was interesting how she soon forgot him. I do think that the end part was my favourite.

The last little section.

I like how, although Ziva is so obviously interested in Tony at the club, she still stays true to herself and doesn't try to change to impress him. The feminism bit I mean.

Yeah, really great Hay, won't be long before I come back to re-read this!

Merry Christmas.

Rose Aarac chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I LOVE IT! Great one shot.
zats chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
A very good story of what might have been how they orginally met. Wouldn't mind reading more.
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Cool idea. Nice job!
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2009

I HATE you!

This makes me feel so much worse, because that was freakin' amazing!


You now understand what i'm like when i talk about tiva. I am like that right now, with less noise.


I love the long paragraph at the begiinning, and the Ari bit! And just




Feminism - lmao :P

'One night stand aren't meant to feel like this' Awh! Omg! I love you so much right now! Lingering memory...

It's sad and amazing and tivaey and you're amazing and i love and gah!

Brilliant, stunning, and of course i really like it!

Amazing. You're such a talented writer, and i'll tell you aagin even though i know you won't listen - you should write tiva more often.