|Reviews for A Dickens of a Dream|
| gumibear26 chapter 4 . 2/14/2010
Good thing Jasper had some clothes on - like you said, too distracting otherwise. Sorry this review is so late in coming - RL has gotten in the way. I like the way Bella's mind see Alice as Tinkerbell. Cute.
| Txsal1 chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
Another great chapter! I just love this story! I really liked the part where Bella pinched the bridge of her nose in frustration and Alice made the comment about them being perfect for each other. That was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. As usual, you rock. Now, I know this is going to sound really stupid but I can't help it, I'm new to this stuff - how do I vote for Dark Side of the Moon, as indicated on your author's note? Where do I go? Please let me know if possible. I would love to cast votes for both stories!
| mommy2kh chapter 4 . 2/5/2010
I liked all the different futures! Now will Bella know which to decide so she meets Marley? Can't wait for the next update!
Bondie, I was so excited to see you nominated in so many categories for the Eddies/Bellies - I voted for you in every one - good luck!
| Rakusa chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
ah I love the point you made about not smelling, hehe, it's better for Major too... I said right that I loved the JACOB marley bit, right? Really the only thing I don't get in this story is Vanessa-Nessie? Cuz she'd have to have a kid with edward for that to happen right? I realize that the real name of the kid was different, but still...Jacob was kind of inexcusably in love with Bella and I don't see that really changing all that much, except for the fact that she wouldn't really go down to la Push with the gang if she didn't get involved, but she would still, even if she hadn't met Edward, she just wouldn't have promised to be careful. Then again, she wouldn't have gone to see Jacob during New Moon either in depression and solidify that bond and depend on him so drastically either had she not been edward-broken.. So... I would think they'd just both be lonely, or working towards a some-what relationship, definitely not together with someone so closely related in name... hehe..
| Rakusa chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
hehe, I love it! I love all the little induendoes and tidbits that you put in there that are so important for the future, but now Bella can't remember them and somehow the present vamps are talking to the "ghost" vamps, but they can't sleep and yet they're all involved and know that their crossroads are connected to hers... hmm. Its so complicated when you sit there and think about it, but in the end, I just absolutely adore this story. I knew I would, that's why I waited until I had time to read it, I loved the concept from the getgo. It's sad though that she doesn't remember it exactly, I thought it would be funny to see how she'd react if she did remember. Oh well. It works out anyways!
| AnjieNet chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
Certainly a naked JaspHair would be a treat. As would a naked Marley for that matter! Just love the nicknames Bella is using, by the way. Probably my favorite chapter. I loved the use of the television screens to show Alice's visions of the future...and then looking at "Marley"'s future and the abhorrable possibilities that come to light. But then the flickers of hope as Jasper notices Edward in the snow and then they see a Christmas future for the both of them. Can't wait for the next chapter though I hate to see this little fic come to an end. So entertaining and fun!
| suedwind chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
I just love this story :)
The nicknames (especially for Jasper) are so funny.
The way you can swich from funny moments to sarcasm to tragedy to romance is amazing.
I really enjoy reading this story and I whish there would be more than just one chapter to come ;)
| love bite chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
I love the names she has for everyone. They crack me up.
| love bite chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Fedoredward and JaspHair. You guys seriously crack me up. and, I can tell we are about the same age-come on, Bella's excited about a new CD player? Do teenagers even know what CD's are these days?
Ha Ha. I am a teacher and tell my students I remember when CD's first came out, and they think I am a dinosaur.
| xomessymutt17 chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
this is very good please have more edward or also known as marley show up more?
| bookobsessive chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Awesome! I just fiound time to read all 4 chapters. I know its February but *shrugs shoulders* real life does get in the way. Nice story. I loved the way the characters are portrayed. Nicely done. And Emmett and the twin Rosalie's is classic. LMAO! You nailed him. Good work. It's a fun romp.
| LiqueArdena chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
I like the way you made Alice's visions into a tv wall (kind of like at the tv store). :) Nice to be able to visualize what Alice sees. This story is pretty crazy, but still fun. I like when Alice makes fun of Bella for calling him Marley. I also like all the nicknames you gave Jasper, and yes, we would probably have gotten very distracted by a naked Jasper. Btw, what is a "pas de chat" cause it looks an awful lot like "cat's step" to me, and I'm not getting much sense out of that.
| Mizra chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
That was very cute. I look forward to the next chapter.
I'm still LOLing at Major Intensity and Tinkerbell.
| Elanor123 chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
| bouncy 72 chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Lol, much as I would have loved a naked JaspHair I did love how you dressed him...taking into account that he hated his scars, it seems like something he would do. I loved how you described the differences between him & Alice. (Lol, especially their hair...)
Aww "Major Silent-But-Deadly spoke" I Love this name for him!
*Grin* I loved when Bella pinched the bridge of her nose & Tink & Major Serious laughed.
Liked the relaxing effect "Major Bipolar" created
Wow...“Life is made of a tapestry of decisions. Some are more important than others in the grand scheme. The real decision you have to make is whether or not you take your mom’s advice to truly spread your wings. Unless you look outside the insulated world you’ve created, you’ll miss your true future.” - that was beautiful!
"Major Who-Are-You-Kidding" & "Major Superiority" I am SO LOVING the Major...? names...
Damn I really really need a "Major wants to kiss me right now" now :P
I loved the screens idea especially when "Major I'm so in love with" pointed out the more positive screen.
Thanks for the awesome chapter :)