Reviews for First
ShadowCell chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Somehow this doesn't seem as good as "Next." You presented Epyon as dignified, cunning, as you put it, "created for someone with some age." But Wing Zero is a little asshole here. If I were to give these mobile suits a personality of some kind, I would have to peg them both as the same, created for a mature person. After all, they both use the ZERO System. Still, it does kinda make sense for Wing Zero and Epyon to have two distinctly different personalities, since they are two distinctly different mobile suits—but I think you should've given Epyon and Wing Zero some matching personality traits, since both mobile suits are so different, yet so similiar.
Emmy aka Angel Aphrodite chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
This was pretty good! *applause* I'm so excited now...I have to go watch my Gundam Wing DVD again! _

Katie chapter 1 . 1/22/2002
This was great! I was funny and serious at the same time! Great fic!