Reviews for Say it in a Sentence
Harp4545 chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Wow, this really puts thiings into perspective, huh? It's a really good comparison for the two of them and really brings out their chemistry together! :)
passwordrawr chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Cries into hands.
yootena chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This was beautiful;I loved it!

You captured the character's personalities extremely well.

Hope to read some more of your work in the future! :)
J chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Awww! This is cute. I always love reading old stories, so that's why I'm reviewing months after.
partner555 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
i liked it chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
it was good but it almost sounded like an english project but /besides that i like thhe ideas and stories 7/10
namelessmistress4 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
DarkMagicianGirl114 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Good Job.
Serpent at Sunset chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Beautiful sentences. My favorite was #15. You made them seem so completely in love.
Twilight Smash chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
It was good you really explained their love without going overboard. You could use some of this and make a story about them. Keep up the good work.
Mr. Martin chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
What a beautiful story you have crafted.

I think use should use some of the stuff you have here (or all of it, that would be better) and make a full length story out of it. No need to rush, just take sentence at a time.

Hugh D. Martin