Reviews for Chocolate Covered
GoldenDiscord chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Aw this was cute. I'm not sure how a chocolate covered grapes would taste but still. Tis good.
AnnoMizuki chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
haha I love christmas updates :D

good oneshot :)
Chalcedony Rivers chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Woohoo! I LOVE that! It really resonates with the original play, too, when Hanschen actually feeds him grapes. So cute!
Demactica chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
"Is it no good?” The voice in my head read that in some weird Italian/Spanish accent haha. Weird.

Anyway WOW, this was totally great, especially for a first SA fic. I don't know what you were worried about at ALL. Ernst was just amazing, especially the bit at the beginning - he totally would worry needlessly that he did something wrong. Mm... chocolate-covered grapes. Nummy. And btw the line about "meaning" was right-on. Have you read the Wedekind version? I can lend it to you if you want, it's the Franzen translation. They're actually feeding each other grapes in Wedekind's vineyard scene.

WRITE MORE :D xx