Reviews for Welcome to the demon's den
666snoopy chapter 12 . 2/16/2020
Great job!
Special K chapter 12 . 8/26/2017
Fabo story indeed!
Kokoa Kirkland chapter 12 . 10/1/2016
Well the love always win (?
Guest chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
The story is so interesting I nearly cried
yuyu chapter 12 . 1/26/2016
Can u make sequel for this story
AzucenaXshadows chapter 12 . 2/3/2015
This was both sweet and confusing lol

Thanks for sharing.
Chandra Migina chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
Loved it, loved it, loved it

I'm sorry. I'm not the best for constructive criticism, but I still wanted to post something.

I really enjoyed reading your story. It was great, the feelings, love scenes and the emotional parts were heartbreaking.
I also liked how you encoded the past and present (even thought I did guessed it to be something like that ).

But it was still perfect and thank you for sharing. Oh an amazing writing styl xD
Guest chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
It was nice until the middle but I think it would have been better if the ending was more emotional and a bit detailed.
YAOILUVRGRL chapter 12 . 10/24/2013
Aww. The ending was so sweet. I really enjoyed this fic. You did a great job :)
Jassi J chapter 10 . 10/17/2013
lulu422 chapter 12 . 9/17/2013
awwww! you,my friend, are just a mother flippin genius, please continue to make awesomeness
morticaaddams chapter 12 . 6/14/2013
It was a very beautiful story, I loved it. I'm happy for your brother as well. :-)
bee chapter 12 . 2/27/2013
this story is old but i must say it was beautiful. i do hope you will make more works off art like this one as its hard to find good sasunaru thats not pwp even of ii read those now & then... anyway goodbye and good luck darling. i hope ur bro is fine
Limeru chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Wow! The story is a bit rushed, but not totally. And all in all its a good, no, a very good story. I don't like this story, I love it! I have read and review some of your works before, and I must say I really enjoy all of them specially this.
Really, wow. The plot is really good and you delivered it nicely. Although you still need more practice in putting more emotion to every sentences you make, to the point that your readers will forget their surroundings and feel what the others feel and see what the others are seeing. And I think you still need to work on grammar on some parts. And also minor mis-spelling.
Is there a sequel for this? Even a one shot about their love life is good for me.. Please? I have a suggestion, if you're going to make a sequel, how about the story on how Naruto and his paranormal buddies, with the help of Sasuke, defeat other evil entity that threatens their peaceful life? or something like that? Just a suggestion..
PERSON chapter 12 . 12/8/2012
What if the baby that Narto currently held was Kyuubi or Mina to his past parents tats really creppy -_-
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