Reviews for A Rough Start Outtakes
Patriciadiane chapter 5 . 10/13/2020
I'll miss this family.
Patriciadiane chapter 4 . 10/13/2020
these bets between boys. oy
Patriciadiane chapter 3 . 10/13/2020
Anthony is a doll.
Patriciadiane chapter 2 . 10/13/2020
$20.00.
Patriciadiane chapter 1 . 10/13/2020
cute fun outake
Agonidzo777 chapter 5 . 3/6/2020
Awesome, I really liked this story.
cctwilight chapter 5 . 7/14/2019
Edward struggled with doing the right thing for Anthony. One of the best things Edward did was to take him to Oregon. Edward gave Bella a really good gift!
cctwilight chapter 4 . 7/14/2019
Of course Jasper won!
cctwilight chapter 3 . 7/14/2019
This brought tears to my eyes.
cctwilight chapter 2 . 7/14/2019
Guys will be guys.
cctwilight chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
So cute!
LaPumuckl chapter 5 . 1/18/2017
:)
Mtgora chapter 5 . 12/14/2016
Amazing story! I couldn't stop reading and would sneak even a chapter at a time...every time I had 5 minutes to spare. My heart broke for everyone at some point or another in the story, but I also found my heart soaring for everyone at times too. So so good. Thanks for posting!
dpennell007 chapter 5 . 11/20/2016
Thanks for these great last looks into their lives, and for leaving your stories up for us to read years after having been written. It's much appreciated!
Rita01tx chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
Dreams are such funny things, especially for a clueless five-year-old! Havin' no reference to explain the sex noises he's hearin' comin' from Edward's bedroom, Anthony's dream interpreted them into a princess in distress adventure...love how the slammin' doors represent the bangin' of the headboard LOL!

Damn, this is really the end, ain't it? Well, it was fun while it lasted LOL! Thanks again *HUGS!*
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