YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY .. its so .."mysterious".. lol anyways its really good and i cant wait until you write more .. please dont forget about this story

I thought the story was great, I liked how you set up the charactres in each chapter. I can't wat till you finish the rest of the story (i'm glad it was good and so far long because most of the stories on have good 1st chapters and then nothing else, but yours had a good first chapter and then more) I think it would be good if you could detail th esurroundings more and make it a little bit less confusing. BUT it was still really good!-Illiamwa

Ah - tricky. This is really the review for the real chapter 7, not chapter 6. won't let me review #7 twice.

I love the bit about the letter - writing it and then shredding it. Very true to life, and a good literary device, too.

Can't wait to reach Aunt M's!

Great! I definitely like this story-it's a good one. Thanks a billion for your review, by the way-Hey, contact me on AOL instant messenger sometime if ya want? We'd have fun talking...

Anyhoo, TTFN, toodloo!

::cackles:: Yes, you very definitely pulled an Ellimistic manuever with this one. Hee. You need to write the next chapter. I'd be more talkative, but it's 1:30 AM and I'm exhausted.

Marisa. Not Marissa. Marisa.

Hooray! There's a brilliant sense of the culture shock that hits Johnson when he gets to London. Big cities can be an overwhelming experience, and this chapter conveys that very well.

Need I say it? Keep writing!

What's supposed to be wrong with the formatting, BTW? Looks fine to me!

Wow, the formatting worked! But I hate Word format and this stupid font!

Question to anyone who actually reads reviews... You know when in the middle of a story a paragraph will suddenly show up scrolling left to right instead of top to bottom? How do you fix that? Anyone know?

This is excellent so far! I've never been to Europe either, so I'm no help there...But anyway, please keep going! I can't wait to find out what happens; this is really good! Toodles!

hi! good story so far- I'm enjoying it! Anyway, I'm a Londoner and proud of it, so I'll try to help. I don't really know how to explain a London street, because there's lots of different kinds- you need to be more specific about what you want. Email me at , and tell me what you want to hear. Ask me questions, and I promise I'll answer. O.K?

Luv sparkley xxx

Cool story.

About London: It's noisy, there's usually a lot of posters for concerts and stuff plastered everywhere and there's quite a lot of street sellers. If you don't cross the street fast enough the drivers will mow you down. The people walk too damn fast so they're always banging into your shoulders. There's a billion people on mobile phones and someone's always trying to nick your shopping. I love it! Oh, and there's ALWAYS a traffic jam, there's lots of pigeons and cyclists should probably wear body armour. Hope that helps. :o)

Very good so far. How long before you start the plot? (just curious)

This is a very good chapter. It's great to see someone getting under Iorek's skin (or should that be fur? :)

ooh! interesting... add more soon!

oooh! sounds good! ahve you ever read "The New Beginning" by Peacockgirl? i swear, one of the best HDM continuations (where lyra and will, one of the perfect couples besides Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Lily/James, Marco/Me, Jake/Cassie, and Tobias/Cassie, get back together!) ive ever read. anyway, this sounds interesting, on to the next chapter!