Reviews for Happy Black Christmas
x-X-x.Tsukiyomi-x-Amu.x-X-x chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Anna find that quite flattering to hear that from Koko. (A/N : i feel that something's wrong with this sentence.. any other way to say this?)

this should be 'anna FOUND that quite flattering to hear from koko.'

Kitsuneme cut in and all of them start to disperse (A/N : is this the right way to use this word? O.o)

yes this is the right way to use the word

Ruka asked Hotaru fearing Mikan might be sad or either jealousy(?).

it should be 'ruka asked hotaru, fearing mikan might be either sad or jealous

hope that helped, loved the story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Oh.. They're so Mikan, Natsume, Hotaru , Ruka and the others..

So funny! Thumb up~

Merry CHristmas to you too!