Reviews for Deadline
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Nice!
Chibinelly chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
This is like my favourite type of Gravitation fics. I just love to read about mean, cold, dominent Yuki. The way you've written him goes with his personality a lot. I've read fics before with Yuki being too warm and fluffy. It creeps me out !

Loved the story !

hehe you know Yuki is a jerk Shuichi so deal with it

Good luck with your future works ! I hope I'll get to read more Yuki/Shuichi fics of yours
MistressOfRobins chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
*Nosebleed* Omg, HOT! :P Totally loved it!
Kendra chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Dude, I think I was even breathing with this one It was so hot geez I love you so much
veroonika chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
i really liked the story, the sex part was intresting too but i found that when yuki said "shun" or something like that it was a little out of character and a know thats what we want to hear but when i readed it is sounded strange.
Demon Vampire180 chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
This was amazingly cute. I forgot how good Shu/Yuki stories could be. I haven't read Gravitation in awhile and your story made me glad I did!
gothss123 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
out-standing!
MP3228 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
omg omg i loved it and you actually remembered that shuichi is uncircumsized :D

i hope you dont mind me asking but do you know when shuichis real birthday is?
Anellesti chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
HOTT! do you have any more
aniki chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
haha, wonderful! thanks for sharing :)
LURVEuALL chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
YUKI IS SO MEAN!

BUT THAT WAS AWESOME!

...i wish i could have heard the parts i missed

it was awesome!
anon azure chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
whahahahahaha

Yuki's a but *cough*evil*cough*

GREAT STORY!
HTTS-76 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
To yuudai-suzumu,

Thank you for the compliment (it secretly made me smile). Yuki Eiri is such a tease isn't he? I hope I kept the characters in character to make it enjoyable to read (not that the story has a plot or anything).

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
yuudai-suzumu chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
BEST STORY EVER. loved it, that would so happen!
PremonitionKing chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
That was wonderful... Totally cute. Ending was great.
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