Reviews for Fractured
Lin-isfallingupthesky chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Aw...that was sad. :C I can relate to Hollyleaf behaving that way and going a bit mental. I've seen some people call her 'evil' and stuff, LOL, but bah, she deserves a bit of a break, the life and 'truth' she thought she were living all along turned out to be a lie and her own parents abandoned them, of course that doesn't mean she could go try to off Leafpool but really...I can see why she cracked beneath all that.

Great story by the way! :D
DejectedDawn chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Whoa! That was amazing to read. It made my eyes water a little... she didn't deserve a death like that. I feel sorry for her. D: