OH MY GOODNESS! such a good chapter! write more, please :)

Love this story so far...please continue!

MORE MORE PLEASE MORE MEN I WANT THE REST OF THE STORY! ITS AWESOME! KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK!

This was an AWESOME chapter. Also, that fish was really creative. I hope things turn out alright and that the personal thing you mentioned isn't a bad one.

fantastic chapter the story seems to be getting quite interesting.

eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Lovely chapter. I really enjoyed Neytiri being taught Snap, and your development of the events back on earth was excellent. And that fish is the weirdest thing I have ever seen! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great stuff. You can tell that you did a lot of background research and invention to the general setting and particularly Na'vi biology. The spots in particular have been one of the more original things I've run across. It's also nice to see some character development instead of things just happening in the blink of an eye.

I like the direction the fic is going. Take your time, do it right.

There's always people that just refuse to see the obvious truth in front of them.

Hi! An awesome chapter! I looked up the batfish like you sugested, and it was strange looking, but I wouldn't freak out about it. maybe I saw the wrong fish? Any-who I loved the chapter, better later then never, it's not like we fan readers have set or enforce a dead line. :) It's all for fun here.

Thanks for a good chapter,

Kat

The wait is worth it.

The RDA argument has major flaws with it. The biggest one being, why would Pandoran life need to evolve if everyone is happy and healthy. Evolution is a concept only known to humans, and the RDA appear to be imposing it on the Navi. But why? If you can add a why part to the argument then that makes it so much stronger than what you currently have.

Wendi will need to meet this fish...

that was really awesome i absolutely love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter.

does hnene like norm aw and astri said her first word. it is all so sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A very good chapter. I see relations between Norm and Hnene have got better.

well it was a long wait for this chapter, but if the writing continues on this level, i believe the waits are going to be well worth it for whatever reason they occur. :) excellent story keep it coming.

Great chapter as always.

And I think the batfish are pretty. If you really want to be freaked out by a fish look up pics of a ocean sun fish. Those are quite alien.

Lets hope that everyone on Earth sees right through Selfridge.

Another great chapter, little astiri can walk, I imagining Hnene,Norm and Astiri a nice happy family, I'm glad that Hnene is not rude to him, and hope she warms up to him a bit more. Hope everything will be ok with Jake/Neytiri's baby. Also in regards to the update, life happens and somethings are more important, but I'm happy to see an update.