Great chapter. I liked seeing Norm and Hnene come to an understanding.

I like your writing a lot, I like the way Hnene is developing as a character. But I think the birth scene was lacking something. It's slight unbelievable that Hnene would birth her baby on the ground. I feel as though she should have had a pile of leaves as a cushion or that Norm would have caught the baby.

Definitely spend time with the dialogue in the next scene of those two which I'm assuming is Norm taking Hnene back to the Nest...

-Padme

p.s. Grace for a girl for Neytiri and Jake!

This was AMAZING.

You captured the whole concept of what was Avatar and just made the fic so believable, I could definitely see it as if it was playing in my head. It's like the sequel I would SO love but early! XD

I don't mind waiting for a week or something... This is actually quite fast considering the time it takes me to write my own fic. XD I hope you keep going though, for like another 50 chapters or something, lol. This could be an epic fanfic! XD

wow, excellent chapter. at first i was like is eywa trying to punish him for taking the samples when all the lightning started. but i like how it forced him to the ground and he found hnene. really enjoying this hope you update again soon

Yay, another chapter! It makes me so happy to see the email alerts for this story in my inbox. :)

So the RDA is being sabotaged back on Earth? Interesting... Hopefully it's the Parker cousin's mission they're working on.

Go Norm! He not only got an ikran, he scored some points with Hnene! I really hope she won't hate him anymore.

It's cute that Jake and Neytiri named one another's ikrans. I wonder if it's tradition for a rider and an ikran to be of the same sex, or if that's just down to chance. As for Jake and Neytiri having kids... I hope so! Although the plot is thickening, so maybe they won't for awhile. Ah well. One baby is enough for now. :)

Good luck with the next chapter!

Fantastic story. Sometimes with fan fictions I get this sense that something the author wrote didn't fit in with the original universe, but your story feels like a flawlessly natural extension of the story as told by Cameron. I love the length of the chapters and admire the effort that must go into creating them!

I'm not sure what was happening with the Earth scene at the beginning of this chapter, but I look forward to finding out!

I love your story, but I had a couple of comments on the use of the Na'vi language - when you wrote about the hunting party you said "taronyu". That means hunter (singular)... I think you either meant "taronpongu", meaning hunting party, or "aytaron", hunters (plural)... Just some thoughts! :D Thanks for the great story, and keep up the amazing work!

~Neytiri

hooray for Norm!

And for updates! :D

This chapter was really good! I really think you capture the essence of Avatar when you write, which totally makes me want to read on. The only thing I was confused about was at the very beginning with the rebels and the lava tube? What was that about?

great chapter, and i'm glad hnene is starting to a little nice to norm, and i'm glad she had her baby :) continue soon

Thank you for writing another chapter, I was impatient to continue reading... great work!

Another brilliant chapter! I'm seriously loving Hnene and Norm's relationship. UPDATE

Lol well here is a review for ya so you can write faster. I just finished the chapter and I agree You did well with the ikran of your making. I very much loved this chapter. do I sense a growing love between Norm and Hnene. ) well awesome chapter can't wait for more!

Okay, so every time I see the update in my inbox, I squeal like a little girl and get all giggly! This story is pretty much the only fanfiction I've found that flawlessly continues on from where Avatar left off. And you do it just superbly. So, needless to say, I adore this story and the way you write it. Being an author myself I understand what the writing process is like and how hard it is to stay in canon. But you're doing a fantastic job. Keep up the good work and I will be waiting patiently for your next chapter. I refuse to tell you to update soon, because you'll do that whenever you get the chance! So, until then good luck and don't work yourself to death!

ja'ne- Ami

A white ikran? awesome! I saw the movie for the fifth time last night :D I loved this chapter!