I've been following your story for a while and it's one of the best Avatar stories so far, with a creative story and intriguing (OC) characters! But know you are so mean! Evil cliffhanger.

Andrey: It seems to me that you are not a big Avatar fan reffering to Jake as Sully, and saying that he has to pay for his deeds. So if you don't like 'humans' dying then stop reading and! In my opinion the RDA ( aren't human at all, they are more like the nazi's or any other organisation that kills & discriminatie people only because they are different. The Na'vi have every right to them away, the are

Another wonderuld chapter, glad to get a little background info on Hnene, she's TsuTey's cousin. I feel so bad for Jake and Neytiri I hope they find out their son is alive very soon.

Yes, that'd be really good to read the next chapter. But please, don't make people look like fools or idiots! Yes, NaVi are "good guys", but they must not always win! It really makes me feel uncomfortable, when I see humans dying.

this is such an pulling story! I can't stop reading it! I can't wait for the next update!

OMG! Everybody's in pretty desperate straits. Please update again soon!

Ah! Evil! :) I love this story, you're such a great writer. Haha. Omg they stole Jake's baby! Ah! You need to update because I want to know what happens to Wendy's baby! :)
~Hawkie

well done like all the chapters before.
BUT...
...you ARE evil. I am sitting on the edge of my chair now, heart bouncing - like a lot of your readers will be for sure. Feeling devastated.
The only thing which will make you less "evil-like-Quaritch" is bringing us a new chapter ASAP - hopefully with all of them surviving... please! (puppy-dog-eyes and pouting)

Those poison arrows sound pretty good right now, but I think I'll wait til the next update to decide about using them :D This is all so wrong but I'm hoping you'll solve this thing... maybe in the next chapter? Please? Otherwise, this fic is still amazing and I'm happy whenever I get an alert about new chapters.

That's really interesting! May be, this time people'll show their true might. It becomes really boring, when in all fanfics people are being knocked out by shooting couple of arrows. Sully must pay for his deeds.

This is getting exciting. Good chapter.

I don't understand. Jake felt the three cousins die, but he didn't feel his son die. Why does he assume he's dead then?

Confuzzled.

Oh and MOST AWESOME PLAN EVER! :D I was grinning as I read it. Devious. I hope it works.

Your writting is awesome, love it. When I read you I see the movie scenes over and over, I just love how good you know Neitiri, Jake also but her... you just got her spirit exactly the way I saw her on Cameron's movie.

The Earth scenes leave you with a nice portion of mistery, of suspence that leaves you eager to know the rest... yo understand what is going to happen next, also beautifull how all whats happening is so unpredictable...

Would love to read the whole story in one shot, this is new for me... reading as you write JAJAJA but I'm really excited during every wait... would also love the story to go faster but then I realize that that would bring it to an end sooner... and that's really not what I want.

Big hug for you and keep it up, youre really good! awesome!

This was exactly what I was looking for. The end of "Avatar" left much to be desired, and you have begun to complete it in a way that makes sense. There were some things that I expected, but many I did not. You flesh out the background of Pandora and the Na'vi, answering questions I did not even know I had until they were answered. I enjoy your style of writing, and your mix of romance and adventure. On thing I like about your story is how you put in little details: this makes it easier to imagine Pandora as if one were there. If one thing were to be improved, I would have the instalments come more quickly, although, of course, family, academic and career must come first, and if you are unable to write them more quickly, these chapters are well worth the wait!

Nice story you got here. I just recently found it and have spent the past 2 days sporadically reading through the current 11 chapters. While I did really like the Avatar movie, I can't really say that Avatar fanfiction has ever attracted my interest. To be honest, I still can't say I am a huge fan of Avatar fanfics. The primary reason I love your story as much as I do is simply because it is so well written. A story with the quality your story possesses is quite rare on this site, no matter what the fandom is. Your story has great spelling and grammar, you make nice work of using pronouns, you give in depth detail without going overboard, and you do well keeping all the characters' personalities close, if not dead on, to their cannon counterparts. An added bonus is that your average chapter length is quite decent as well. Even if I had never heard of Avatar, if I had heard how well written this story was I would most likely still have checked it out. I am a big stickler in regards to quality of a story, and even if a story is about one of my favorite fandoms and has an interesting plot, if it is not well written I flatly refuse to read it. If a fanfiction author's skill in writing does not even meet what is expected of a high school senior, then they should not be writing in the first place. It is just making more crap to wade through to find the good stories. I look forward to reading more of your fic whenever you update next.

On a side note, I was really expecting Neytiri to give birth to twins. Since you went on about how Na'vi have never given birth to twins, it would have been an interesting turn of events if she did. I thought this could have been possible due to Jake being a hybrid of Na'vi and Human DNA. Twins do after-all genetically tend to run in a family. I guess having a different eye color is what you decided to go with instead.

a green eyed baby Navi! Love the idea.

Enjoyed the story so far.