This a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you!

Shawn

Another chapter jam packed with action! For the first time, I'm beginning to see how the resolution might happen between the Na'vi and earth. Which is a mix of excitement to know where the story is going and disappointment that it'll end sometime. I enjoy your Norm so very much; love watching him grow into the Na'vi ways. Hopefully you'll develop his spirit animal more ...

The trip into Na'vi mythology was excellent. And you wrote Tomas' birth very well, and unawkwardly. I'm happy for Jake and Neytiri that there are no complications, but I can't help but think that the three of them are not completely out of the woods yet ...

Fantastic job; can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Fantastic chapter! Your attention to detail and the Pandoran world are more than impressive. I love reading how you incorporate the actual established knowledge of the Avatar universe with your own ideas. The way you've imagined the details of the world in conjunction with your own thoughts is awesome-almost seamless.

Anyways, just wanted to say how much I enjoy reading your story. And don't worry about the length of time between updates, unfortunately life has to come before writing sometimes. (I know from personal experience)

Regardless, I look forward to your next chapter.

~TH

There were Doctor Who references? Damn, I wasn't looking for them...

What a delightful story. I really love anything that takes the time to explore the Na'vi culture, and I additionally love that you're not only acknowledging Tom (whose death kinda set the whole story in motion, I think) and setting up the conflict on Earth. I can't wait for more!

And I couldn't possibly review without mentioning that I simply adore your descriptions.

Hi, I’m new to the Avatar fans circle, but... WOW, this story hooked me right from the start, and has compelled me to search high and low for more of the same; it’s Hard- I tell you!

This is the BEST Avatar fanfic I’ve read so far. It’s slow moving as you keep us expecting the RDA to just show-up-already, but the little details on Na’vi exposed by focusing on Norm and adding characters as you go along are well thought out and it’s easy to ignore bigger events to occur.

Usually I don’t much care for dawdling when it comes to fanfics, however I await the next chapter at face value, eager to read... whatever you write next.

It’s the best compliment I can make to a story.

My thanks for this wonderful fic; please do send us more our way as soon as possible.

I admire and appreciate the thought and research that has obviously gone into making this story. It is always a pleasure to find someone so dedicated, not only to writing an excellent story, but taking the time to make it realistic. If you wish to contact me, I am at vivi. . Thanks!

There was a reference to the first song on the series four soundtrack - I think it was all the strange creatures (from the first episode with Marth Jones!XD)... but I'm not sure about the other ones though! I'll have to re-read. I enjoyed it! Please update soon. LL

Wonderful chapter, well worth the wait.

I'm finding it hard to say anything without spoiling anything, so I'll leave it at this, nice work on the eyes.

FABULOUS! Another great chapter! I can't wait to see where this all leads. Love the coastal Na'vi. Love Tomas. Can't wait to see what happens with Kieran and Wendy, and Norm and Hnene. Worth the long wait.

I like the fact that Tomas' eyes are green. I'm assuming there will be something special about that fact? Although with all the talk about Ewya makes me think Tomas will be just that much more significant to the storyline :)

I've already read several stories from different authors and i can say, that they all have the same end. NaVi expel humans from Pandora and live happily. That's too predictable. As for me, the most interesting are moments, when NaVi and humans are trying to learn, to understand each others culture, ways of living.

Even smarter decision would be waving the magic wand and wishing for Na'Vi surrender)) I wonder why people keep writing stupid comments about "orbital bombardment" EVEN if certain human ship is simple transport without ANY military capability.

I think, that it'd be smart decision for humans to perform an orbital bombardment instead of infantry attack. I wish, there'd be really smart and artful opponent for Na'Vi.

Utterly unbelievable. Standard supply ship is not in position to demand anything. They have absolutely NO means to invade. It doesn't matter how many weapons are on board, because all these weapons have to be disassembled and/or incomplete. They cannot be put in working order without base facilities down there and locally manufactured parts (and locally manufactured ammo as well). And I'd say having 70 men is really inadequate even if they were properly equipped.

So all RDA threats are hollow, and the scientists at the base should be perfectly aware of this fact. Actually, they are in much better position to extort anything from the unfortunate ship in exchange for fuel and food supplies.

Should build a big railgun and shoot them out of the sky. It'll be like riding a pony!