|Reviews for A Fox's Angel|
| XANAVirus chapter 12 . 9/28/2016
I hope you'll update this story eventually! I've really enjoyed reading it over a few times over the years, and I wish to find out what happens in this alternate universe you've created.
You write Kurumi so well, and there are so few Kurumi fanfiction stories here, your story is one of the best ones in a long time!
| Biblio388 chapter 12 . 4/3/2016
Very cool story and well written. Kurumi is a gem and seeing how she interacts with everyone in Konoha is hilarious. Funny to see people get what they deserve without it being malicious in the normal way. Just malice in response. The Icha Icha Incident was well executed. I can't believe that no one has ever tried that before that I have seen. Certainly would be an amusing Omake if you created one. Otherwise, this is just a great read with a little known crossover that seems to deserve more recognition. Will definitely be following this as long as you continue to write it.
| WhiteFangDarkClaw chapter 12 . 3/6/2016
Keep them please don't forget HSD Naruto.
| Thunder Dragon chapter 12 . 2/1/2016
I have read all the previous chapters up to this point and I have to say well done sir, well done.
but I have a few questions I need to ask.
I really want to see Sasuke dig himself even deeper and become a even bigger asshole and eventually gain his part two tendencies after killing Itachi. So is Sasuke going to breakout of prison and join Orochimaru? Or is Danzo gong to pull some shit on the side to help Orochimaru by springing the brat?
On the topic of Uchiha, what are you planning for Itachi? With Sasuke in the slammer and a messed up psychopath will Itachi gain a pardon as he forced to kill his clan due to Danzo's actions and his brother turned out as crusty as a old wound? I like Itachi as he is one of my favorite characters and I would really like a redemption story for Itachi.
| thunder dragon chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
In regards to make this story original you have succeeded and hooked my interests.
| Findarato chapter 12 . 1/29/2016
This is very interesting story and I wish to read more!
| godzillafan1 chapter 12 . 10/19/2015
I read this story a few years back on the crossover arc on this site but then it was mysteriously taken off couldn't find it there anymore glad this story's still around it's pretty good! so naruto is now saki's master guess that third steel angel karinka will be naruto's as well that one I don't care much for kurumi with naruto is fine they make such a nice couple in this story anyway please write more soon.
| hatred9117 chapter 12 . 6/13/2015
I launch a devastating attack "WEDGIE"
I'm enjoying the story and look forward to more but hope you eventually pair hinata with naruto
| MWRANDOM chapter 12 . 6/1/2015
The main plot is good as is the spelling and grammar. You have issues with many of the minor plot points however which takes quite a bit from the impact your story could have. For example, when the Hokage arbitrarily declared the Uchiha's punishment. The council was making outrageous demands and he basically overruled them and ordered his punishment as was his right as the village is at it's core a military dictatorship. The very next chapter however, he has for some reason caved to the council's pressure, reversed his sentance and declared that the Uchiha get's a public trial. As shown that would TOTALLY destroy any respect that the Hokage commands in the village rendering him impotent and nothing more than a figurehead. It totally invalidates the position and the man holding the position. You could have gotten around this if you had a scene where concessions were made to him or shown a scene where reasons that a public trial would benefit the Hokage, the Ninja Corps, or the village as a whole. As it is the Hokage went from ruler of the village to glorified village secretary in one scene. Anyway, as I've said I like the overall storyline so I'll say overall it's a decent story, it just needs some polish with the minor plot points in order to make it better.
| Naruto Fan chapter 12 . 5/30/2015
Happy to see you writing new chapters for these entertaining stories. Keep up the good work and hopefully your personal life situation gets better too.
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/26/2015
Can't wait for the next chapter
| Sagacious.Utilitarian.Network chapter 12 . 5/24/2015
This a very nicely written. It was a great story. You should continue it. I give it a 8.75/10
| xxPercyRoxxx chapter 12 . 5/23/2015
This chapter answered my previous question. Hope you can update again soon. Will Hinata ever accept she lost her chance with Naruto?
| ARSLOTHES chapter 12 . 5/22/2015
Pretty good fic, hope you update sooner for the next chapter
| xxPercyRoxxx chapter 10 . 5/22/2015
If Naruto 'awakened' her fully with a kiss would her loyalties change to Naruto?