|Reviews for Whisper|
| rukiharem chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Aww, cute story.
| Hipolita chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
thanks for writte!
| Star7 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Both these fics were really nicely written :) No awkward bits at all. Nice job! I particularly like the way things happen without your explaining or pointing it out (like how we don't notice the girl is coughing until Sakuragi notices it). That's really unique :)
Your OC character is a little thin. We don't know who she is or what her relationship to anyone is. Its a little frustrating that we don't know enough about her.
It seems a little sudden that Rukawa is looking through the presents without any warning since we all know he's as interested in women as he is in gymnastics. And how does she know Sakuragi's name, its not explained? I must have missed something but I didn't really understand :(
In short your writing style is fantastic, but the story is a little thin. An enjoyable read nonetheless! Thanks for posting!
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I thought Sakuragi and this girl would end up together, but then I realized she's the girl in Ladder.
I don't like OCs much but she's okay, since she's not that whiny. Didn't know Sakuragi can be deep somehow. She's kind of Sakuragi the girl version.