Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You
Sweetie7smiled chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Cute little story! Thanks for writing!
Brighter Dreams chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I know it's been a really long time since you've posted this but I wish you would continue the story. I really liked the idea and your writing was wonderful. Great job!
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
So cute u shud make it into a story of how their lives turn out together. How twilight worked out if they wanted to b together in the first place
LouLouCullen chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Loved it so much, bust kinda wish there was more.
cb chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
i really like this one shot but i also think it could be expanded into an awesome story, good luck what ever you choose and i hope to read more of your work soon.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Eris1031 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I love this story. Thanks for writing it.
cb chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
i really like this story it is a good one shot but i think it would also make an amazing story of love at fisrt sight, just a suggestion...
cock-and-coke-my-white-rabbit chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Best EXB one-shot i've read! Bravo!
Doctor Feel good chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
hi! i loved this story too bad it's a one shot! i would love to have a full story off this! do you know more stories that are slightly as this( you know that they saaw their future)? x another twilight fan
11232637484929 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010

I'd like to say that you had great spelling and grammar in your story, but I found it hard to get into. Something just didn't really click.

Plus, I couldn't really imagine what you were trying to describe.

Sorry if that sounded harsh, the story was OK, but I would've liked to see it awesome.

Inspiration is Key Contest chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Great story! It has now been entered in the C2, good luck. :)
turmy chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
i really like this and i hope you consider writting more. chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
love it .its perfect and sweet
kylemaca77 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I really love the concept of your story. I understand that it was meant to be a one-shot, but please consider expanding it into a full blown story. Thanks
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