|Reviews for Prodigal|
| Furionknight chapter 25 . 2/1
I look forward to more :)
| MysticChaos chapter 25 . 4/1/2012
Hooo...well, I know I certainly enjoyed this story. I've read way too many DA fics so far, and though many of them were very wonderful, the plot lines can only get so creative after a while. Haha, so I was intrigued by your take on the story and how you changed the story in subtle, almost more meaningful ways. I also like how your narrative pretty much skipped the "boring parts" and went straight to the differences in the story.
Most importantly, I liked how you made the decisions made in DA more gray and painful when the game regrettably feels more black and white in the choices one makes. I especially liked the Landsmeet duel. The moment when Maebh drops her swords to embrace her father to protect him felt strikingly powerful. So...overall, awesome job!
| Cybrind chapter 25 . 9/30/2011
I love when I stumble across stories like this. Fascinating concept and I couldn't tear myself away until the end.
Most excellent work!
| Crystal Night chapter 5 . 8/9/2011
... I dont like this Cailan. He's a horn-dog. Talking about all the girls he's tried to replace her with but none would do. Then glances over the fact that she hasn't gotten a single one of his letters in 10 years and jumps right into her robes.
Worse is she lets him. Her first time is with a guy she hasn't seen or heard from in 10 years? Also he's married and as a bad rep (which seems to be very much true). Bad Cailan!
guess we'll have to see where this goes
| Merithea chapter 15 . 6/6/2011
I'm just reading this fic now and I am loving the difference of it. The chapter where they sweated the lyrium out of Maebh made me cry a little. :D That's the sign of a great story...it draws you in so much you feel the characters. :D
| naomis8329 chapter 25 . 5/13/2011
I've just read this story from start to finish and have sobbed my way through it lol. Why can't we have happy endings for a change, I'm sure I should have part ownership in Kleenex by now.
A wonderful story, heart rending in places, funny in others. Full of hope and love, betrayal and angst. I do hope the sequel gives Maybe a chance of happiness, good god she deserves it bless her.
Thank you for sharing.
| jackie1504 chapter 16 . 5/13/2011
first of all, i'm really enjoying reading this!
the back story is unique and rather intriguing. and though the story is close to the game plot, it has interesting and unexpected twists.
second of all, i really love Alistair in this! the way he's been looking out for her, taking care of her and sometimes saving her.
he's too sweet)))
BUT i thought that after her words *I was supposed to be the Teryn's second* Al would put the pieces of the puzzle together.
considering there were only two Teryns in all of the Ferelden...
but it's just a thought... may be i just missed something)))
anyway, the progress from chapter to chapter is obvious. and the story is captivating me)
| TheArchdemon chapter 24 . 4/15/2011
WOW. THAT WAS... REALLY HOT. I MEAN, EXCEPT THAT I DIED, BUT ... GUH.
IF ANYONE NEEDS ME I'LL BE IN MY NEST OF HUMAN SKULLS.
| Rosabell chapter 25 . 3/31/2011
I love this story! It didn't turn out to be about Amell and Cailan after all, though. I like how Amell is Anora's sister, and how Loghain loved her after all!
| JessicaJones chapter 17 . 3/3/2011
Wait seriously where is the sex scene? Did they just have sex?
Hmm, I guess I'll check the next chapter.
| JessicaJones chapter 10 . 3/3/2011
Guess what I am reading this! I bet you thought I wasn't gonna.
I love how sympathetic Greagoir is. Also Maebh is a complete lunatic and not just because of the lyrium poisoning, lol.
| fifespice chapter 13 . 2/8/2011
aww teagan is so sweet and kind
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| fifespice chapter 10 . 2/8/2011
wow awesome i actually had tears in my eyes there though what exactly has loghain done to the poor girl