Reviews for Mortal Christmas
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Good story
Reader chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This was so adorable and hilarious in so many ways. It fit the style of MK, what with having an entertaining snowball fight, and a grumpy Scorpion xD Although you did something I can’t stand, and that is interrupting the flow of the story with an author’s note. It happened more than once, but despite that, I still love this one-shot. Although, oddly enough, I can imagine Scorpion wearing a Santa hat! But only if he’s wearing his MK II costume…
I think someone else said this, but you forgot to give Ermac a present. You also made Ermac talk with “I” and “my”, rather then “we” and “ours”.
wolf hawkfield chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
i love it
jesse chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
which mortal kombat is ashara from
Dovahkiin154 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
lucky you went ice skating couldnt you make more chapters it was getting funny and interesting
Aitreit chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Awwwwwww... my lil scorpion grew up on me jkjk Awwwwwww sweet ending
Skynote chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Heh heh I knew they'd be together in the end! Really nice story with the snowball fight - which I laughed at - to the suitable presents and one heck of a Khristmas.

Lol for some reason I actually CAN imagine Scorpion wearing a santa hat XD

Oh but you forgot to write Ermac getting a present! Thats the only thing I was sad about in the story, but other than that it was really cool.
Halloweenchick chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I loved it :3

I love how they all went outside and played snowball fight

i couldnt do that because it was late when the snow arrived DX

Anyway, this story is going to my faves
Binary and Trance chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
This was adorable. And entertaining.

I like humorous MK stories with out them being completely 'random'

Very nice 3