Reviews for The Fire King
AspergianStoryteller chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
... Well there's a twist.
PinkPanther123 chapter 19 . 5/1/2010
Yeep, sorry. Forgot to review for the other chappie...oh well. Good story! ZOMG TWO CHAPPIES...KEEP IT UP! I'll be waiting! ;D

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PinkPanther123 chapter 17 . 4/17/2010
One problem solved! Haha! Keep it up! U

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PinkPanther123 chapter 16 . 4/10/2010
:D I WAS RIGHT! HAHA! Ahem, so. Lol, good chappie, a little short, but still good nothenless. (I have no idea how to spell that lol)

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PinkPanther123 chapter 15 . 4/3/2010
Hm...Clockwork pulled a nasty trick on him, didn't he? Clockwork said, "...Thousands of years through time..." but he didn't say whether it was the past or future! xD It should be impossible, but I think I love Clockwork even more xD

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Darth Fang chapter 14 . 3/27/2010
I loved the story! You need to write more soo.
PhantomMouse1115 chapter 13 . 3/20/2010
found who? Daniel? The evil convict? WHO? Cliffhangers are so suspenceful!
PinkPanther123 chapter 12 . 3/13/2010
*Blink* ...

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BLOODY AWESOME!

xD this chapter is awesome (: GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP!

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PhantomMouse1115 chapter 12 . 3/13/2010
Awesome! I DEMAND MORE!
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 11 . 3/6/2010
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
PinkPanther123 chapter 11 . 3/6/2010
...i know where this is going...hmm... GREAT CHAPTER! KEEP IT UP! :D I LUV THIS!

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PhantomMouse1115 chapter 9 . 2/20/2010
why do they need their hair neat? Oh well, just update!
PinkPanther123 chapter 9 . 2/20/2010
oohh...i think i know whats gonna happen... :D yay! im smart! xD great job and keep it up!

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Donteatacowman chapter 8 . 2/13/2010
:o Plot twist! I admit, I wasn't expecting the Fire King to be THAT! XD

One thing, in Chapter 7:

"And would you stop calling me Dad? It kinda creeps me out." Danny said.

The Fire King didn't call Danny "Dad" until AFTER Danny asked him not to. ;

My theory: David somehow got sent back in time to the reign of Pariah Dark-and stayed there?
PhantomMouse1115 chapter 8 . 2/13/2010
DUN DUN DUN! The Guys In White... when will they ever leave Danny alone? Update soon! Its a great story!
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