|Reviews for Hero|
| Yukabaceran chapter 16 . 7/30
An amazing mindscrew of a fic. Layers within layers within layers...
A masterpiece in my book.
| QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 7 . 9/7/2014
Did you like Brave New World?
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 16 . 7/2/2014
Oooo. Creeper ending xD I like it though (him singing while in the pyramid and asking Ash to sing it for him). It's like even though he doesn't remember, it's like he does remember. Plus it shows he's a relative of Ash since he too was using it to comfort himself in the first chapter.
You did a good job of developing the characters and made an interesting and unique plot (though there were a few mistakes throughout the chapters...I don't remember if there were mistakes in all of them but a good bunch of them).
I'm glad I found this story and read it :) Thanks for writing it!
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 13 . 7/2/2014
Whoa... Just...what the heck? O.o
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 10 . 7/2/2014
Got out? Wait. What. How...I'm confused! Guess I'll just keep reading then.
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 9 . 7/2/2014
Hmm...So Tracey is Aiden...Makes sense since you kinda alluded to that in one of the previous chapters :)
Yay! May was saved! Still have some more to go!
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 6 . 7/1/2014
Ooo it's getting more interesting! :D
| Allie-Cat 83 chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Haha! CALLED IT! I'm so proud of myself! xD hehe.
Anyways, I'm liking it so far and can't wait to read more
| Great chapter 16 . 5/5/2014
Wow, that ending reminded me of an episode in a horror show. Oh well, the story is fine I relly liked it, just that, facing a 6 year-old was wierd. Oh well, Looking forward to more!
| osirisredgirl chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
This was quite interesting and spooky. I have to admit that I did feel a bit scared for Pikachu there, because he is Ash's little buddy D: but I'm glad they were reunited and look forward to reading the rest :)
| anom chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
a bit wierd but well written and clearly shows the unique perspective of thier personalities that you thought up definetely a good FF if a bit strange of a story just realy similar to twilight zone if you catch my drift...
| anom chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
if u hurt his pokemon i kill u till ur dead
(i do not own jeff dunham or any of his alternate personalities including achmed the dead terrorist tyvm for your time:))
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/13/2012
That was magnificent
| Ashley Eon chapter 16 . 10/5/2012
The ending was hilarious XD Nice irony. (I think that was it...)
You scared me half to death with the A/N before the chapter. Where you said it didn't end all happily and I freaked out. But it ended nicely. Nobody died, even. Except Infernape and one of the Dawns, but other than that... yeah.
Thanks for writing!
| thelonearcanine chapter 16 . 8/20/2012
I'm left utterly speechless by another amazing story from another amazing author. Keep writing. It's definitely worth the time and trouble, especially for the ones who get the honor to read your works.