Reviews for Meltdown in the Park
Princess Unikitty chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
looks great so far.
Nancy chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
Luke and Lorelai together and oh, so happy! That is what I enjoy. Now, how to quickly - albeit it tactfully - get rid of Nicole? Please do update on a regular basis. That makes the readers happier. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Another good update soon please.
IncoherentMumbling chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
This chapters are just ridiculously short. It just won't do.
I think ur Superman chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
I must admit I never read this story the first time round

So this is a whole new story for me

And I am enjoying it
glo1196 chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
loved it...hope you update faster than 5 months though!
Puppets Blizzt chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
I love it. :33

Babbling Lorelai, haha.

In the beginning of this chapter, it seemed like it was written in past tense. But by the end, you've switched to present tense. You might want to try and refrain from switching tenses, but other than that, great job!
J.Stone chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
More please.
Reba0is0Ahmazing chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I really like this... I think the chapters could be a little bit longer but still its great!
sarahb2007 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
hmm interesting... update soon
Luke Fan chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I like the start. I cannot wait for the update. Hope you'll keep this story going.
J.Stone chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Leave in the fluff and I'll read it. :-) Thanks
Satan-wears-prada chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
:O I love it! I'm going crazy on Luke and Lorelai right now so this is brilliant :D Update soon! :D