Reviews for A Losing Battle
sp72 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Great written. Something that is really rare. Hope for more...
Aconitum-Napellus chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Excellently written - you've left me wanting more!
kamelion chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
I love this scene, and I love that you wrote it from Spock's pov! Thank you for this!
Lily chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
"The creature is above me, dominant, higher up in the chain of command as it defeats its host and I feel the will to live for myself draining away. A new purpose is infused within me; the purpose of the creature. I am no longer my own self, my own desires. I am now a spectator in my own body as I feel control completely snatched from me, Jim's hands arriving on my shoulders too late to spur me on in the battle.

My body gasps and I hear a groan of pain, but it is not my doing. I exist only as a shroud of agony in my mind; the body struggles on even when the soul has been defeated. Animal instinct within me prevails against logic, against even hope. Gut instinct is stronger than all that my race has fought for, all that they prize above all."

You have an excellent way with words. Just two reviews for this? Not enough, surely.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
More, please. You've really captured the character.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
wow this is intresting i cant wai tot see what happens