Reviews for Gravity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story |
![]() ![]() I don't have an account, but I read this on someone's recommendation. It was wonderful! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I love this so much! The way you've explored Jim's character, especially in Bones' eyes, is so well done! This chapter was a perfect mix of angst, fluff and comfort. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice snap shots :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter. It seriously stuck with me... I've never seen something written from the perspective of one of Jim's foster parents/relatives on Tarsus - this was original both in its point of you and its rendering. Bravo. ~ CB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. I love all the chapters so far, but this one was a head above them. I really felt the tension there, the desperation, the hell that is starting. It's very impressive. I loved how you wrote it, the perspective you wrote it from and the scenes you chose to put down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really like Winona now... We'll done! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing collection of stories in the StarTrek universe. I have to admit I was bawling by the end of the one featuring Gaila and I came pretty close to doing so again at that last one you have posted as well. Anyways, fantastic job on this fic. I kinda wish there was more though! |
![]() ![]() this is going to be finished right? :) |
![]() ![]() more or is this done? if it's finished add complete |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intense chapter, more tarsus please. |
![]() ![]() Woooowwwwww. Literally all I can say after reading this first chapter. Damn. Way to go! It's dark and gritty and so very Jim (at least the characterization of Jim that I most enjoy reading)! "Your father was a god and you are the shriveled, sobbing, screaming little bundle of spit and shit we got in return for his great sacrifice." That line floored me! Like I actually had to pause a moment to take in the wave of emotionality that followed it like a backlash. Excited to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite chapter! I admit I haven't completely read all the chapters though. |
![]() ![]() Mre coming? Going to finish this someday right :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is an awesome story. are you going to follow up on stid? |