|Reviews for The Black Swan|
| Sunfeathers chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Oh, Betsy, this was so awesome - as I just tweeted, it was everything I wanted and MORE! Your writing is fantastic (as usual) and everything played out so well - the meeting, the weeks of connecting, the bump in the road (freaking Tanya!) and then of course, the resolution - which was HOT *and* beautiful!
And as usual you pleasantly surprise me with things I had not expected - like Tanya telling Edward she wanted Bella to know what to expect. Now, obviously T is a bitch and acted out of jealousy but she was obviously hurt by Edward's dismissal after their hook-up. That surprised me - but it made perfect sense! (You do that in LotS a lot too - you obviously think deeply about your characters and their viewpoints.)
I can't thank you enough for letting me prompt you for this one-shot. This little Boston pub scene had been niggling in my mind for a while and you just hit it out of the ballpark! I just love a bartender story - and I thought it was a neat twist to have Bella be the one behind the bar. And obviously your Edward thought so too - it was so cute how smitten he was with her right off the bat!
I loved your Emmett too - I think he's the perfect big brother, especially when he's going all Brother Bear on somebody on Bella's behalf. :)
So THANK YOU, bb, for this wonderful story - I am going to pimp the heck out of it today! :)
| timidvampire chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
what a skank Tanya is...loved this story!
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Loved it! Fun, tender passionate...amazing!
Leave it to Tanya to try to screw things up for E & B...thank god that didn't work! As for Emmett, he's my fave big bro.
| Did My Heart Love til Now chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
aw! I loved
| fourbrats chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
So awesome. I really hope that you continue this.
| hln3twimom chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I liked it!
| RosyCheeks17 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Great story! :)
| gypsyprincess94 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
:D that was realy good!
| Whitney Love chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Very god. Love it. It could be a whole story not just a one shot. Them getting together and then staying together. So good. I love reading stuff that you write, you are very talented.
| campcathryn chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
| flecour chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
That was excellent!