Reviews for my bestfriend happens to be a player
TheBaconIsAwesomeness chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Okay, you rlly need to either stop writing or use microsoft word. SO many runons and no punctuation. Everything abt this story is wrong. Storyline is good, but you REALLY need to take this story down and get a Beta. I'm never reading your fanfictions again
Bloody Hearts chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Love it! Please update!
bella ya its my name chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
indeed I do like its not to gross with the player missy moments which I see as a plus and I love Edward's comments to Bella. Keep it up!
kittyguns chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I LOVE IT MAKE MORE PLEASEEEEE
Leslie chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
I like it! can u keep on going! Please!
gab000 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
it had a good start!

so far so good
lalalala chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
u need to slow down, storyline was confusing. give more detail and substance not good at ALL.
BellaLeyva chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
LOV IT!

MUST NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!
XxvampireluvrxX chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
plz write more i love it
Twilightfan108 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
kl any mor?is tht the last chap?
heya chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
Yeah its a good plot, just hurry and write more :)
Edward-Bella-Crazy-145 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
hey! :)

loved the start so plz continue

cant wait for the next chapter
personandthing chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
dude; PUNCTUATION! Ever heard of a comma?

and dont put so many letters of your "eww!"

Sorry, but i'm really OCD, anal about punctuation...
bxE4ev chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
awesome
sara chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
it's wonderful begining i'm waiting the next chapter , don't stop pleas
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