|Reviews for Losing His Princess|
| polarpi chapter 5 . 1/2/2010
I'm so sorry to hear about your loss - sending you and your family lots of comforting thoughts during this time.
Looking back, I realized I've read everything you've written - you're a super talented writer, and I look forward to seeing what you publish the next time.
| NCISaddict77 chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
Great story. it made me cry. I'm sorrt about your grandparents and your papa. I will pray for you and your family.
| Carriex3 chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
I'm so sorry for your loss. Writing is a great coping mechanism...I'm glad it helped you in some way.
This story is one definitely one of the better ones I've read on here...and I hope that you post more in the future, but only when you're up to it.
| gaver.b chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
fantastic ending! you truly have a talent, bestie :)
oh and *hugs* 3
| NCIjesS chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
I'm really sorry to hear about your losses. Stay strong, God bless.
| Katiemoose chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Your writing of this story was very touching. You were able to show the reality of such times without it being such a depressing story that people want tostop rteading. During such times of loss there are small moments when someone can ease the pain and distract you just a little as Abby did for Tim. I always thought they would be wonderful friends whether they were romantically involved or not.
Thank you for sharing this story and I wish you all the best dealing with you current loss. It can become overwhelming when toomuch of it happens in a short period of time and I hope that you have an "Abby" to help you through. I look forward to reading your writing again when you have the motivation to do so.
| Brownie Mix chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
im so sorry to hear about your recent losses! i lost my last grandparent a month ago and its very hard. you wrote this story beautifully, full of hope, and i cant wait to read more of your work down the line!
| lilcrazyrabbit chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
u made me cry...i love how Tim cares for his sis
| chelsea1234 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Oh I'm so sorry to hear about your grandparents and your Papa. If it's any kind of consolation I'd think of this as a kind of tribute. It was a beautiful story and I think they would be very proud. Thanks :)
| alix33 chapter 2 . 12/30/2009
"he noticed that Sarah’s car was already in the lot." - What kind of car does she have?
"Sarah ordered a Diet Coke and a Cobb salad. Tim had a glass of water and a club sandwich." - I LIKE the McGee kids' taste in restaurant food!
"She kept rambling on about some scrapbooking club she’s joined. Honestly, I don’t see the point of it. It’s just pictures on overpriced paper with stickers with lame phrases like ‘A sister is a forever friend’ pasted around it.” - That is pretty much how I feel about scrapbooking too, hehehe.
“But it didn’t stop her from making you and your entire scout troop key chains for your backpacks!” Sarah laughed. “I was blocking that memory,” Tim mumbled." - Bless MY mom for not being into handicrafts or crafts at all, hehehe!
| Sophie Ranier chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
Omg! So sad but update soon I wanna hear mcgee's call to his parents. Mcgee's like the only character that's never put in difficult situations, except during "probie" and "caged" but caged wasn't so bad
update soon. And maybe put some mcabby in there I love when Abby ges all comforting it's so sweet
| chelsea1234 chapter 4 . 12/29/2009
OMG! Poor Tim! That's a phone call you never want to make or recieve. Great chapter. Very sad :( Thankyou
| chelsea1234 chapter 3 . 12/29/2009
Oh No! Although I have to admit guiltliy that I'd rather it was Sarah than Abby. That makes me terrible doesn't it. Sorry :(
| gaver.b chapter 4 . 12/29/2009
:'( poor mcgee...poor sarah...
| gaver.b chapter 3 . 12/29/2009
omg! you better not make me wait too long for chapter 4! :(